This review is written as of chapter 70.I am liking the story so far, especially the idea of players starting as Gods and how NPCs will play a major role in the future, not just being bullied and pushed around by players. I only hope that the author will preserve and continue writing no matter what. Rooting for you Author!!!Note: I like the author's naming sense!!! Not like mine :(
Writer's Review...A easy going story about a reincarnated boy with dream of becoming the greatest cultivator in existence.And a book that held all the secrets of the universe
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I got give you 5 star because it is a new undertale fan-fiction . Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
i honestly think the author is high. so far I've read several chapters and from what I've seen the mc should be formidable but I'm seeing is him taking insults left and right. what part of that is formidable. for a man that's served 6 years in the military he sure is a coward. authors like these are hypocritical and honestly just copy a story and somehow make it worse
Negative Girls: To Live and Die is an amazing novel, with comedic aspects behind it. Horror is definitely crucial here, especially covering the dreadful topic of suicide. The writing style is amazing, perfect for fueling my mind to fabricate and print out images. Very well-detailed and the world building is amazing. There are many phrases that can be taken to the real world, and the topic of imperfection is amazing. Keep writing!
AUTHOR HERE
This week the novel hit 109 chapters and I wanted to explain some recurring doubts that some readers ask me.
Yes, it is a harem. I don't know yet if I will put Aurora in the harem. And some people are complaining that the novel's world is modern world that would not accept a harem, but this a fictional world that CAN accept harem.
Why is it slow paced? I want to write a novel that not only focused in the MC earning money and fame. That's why I placed the SliceOfLife tag in the novel.
About some people saying that the characters are similar to anime characters, that's exactly what I am aiming for. I wanted the reader to feel like this is an anime.
The next chapters will be about the MC journey as he dwell in the entertainment industry effectively.
If you like my novel, don't forget to drop Power Stones, Golden Tickets, and Gifts to support my work!
Needs some romance
like some romance
yeah some romance
like really needs romance
romance anyone?
anyone?
The first part where the MC ate the holy reward kinda hurt, and I noticed some people got mad as well in the comments but I’m VERY glad I kept reading. This has become one of my favorite reads on this app.
It’s a comedy-action series, where the MC is basically Saitama from One Punch Man but he actually starts getting recognition slowly. Its sooo satisfying each time as well. Also not just the MC but the side characters are also getting huge buffs by simply following the MC, which most of his companions were enemies or unlucky people that the comedy uses to further show MCs power. All in all it’s a great read.
Wonder if the MC will be similar to how the old master of the comic "Master of lightning knives". Interested in reading about a nice bond developing. There's other novels with the same premise on this platform, but they tend to go downhill.
Comedy keep the story alive.
Five stars for my fav author and buddy...er like, i don't know what to say more but I hope this review would help you somehow. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]