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Honestly, as a reader I tend not to read anything that hasn't reached at least 200 chapters. I breached that rule when i started this novel tonight, and it turned out to be the best thing i have done in a long time. The story is absolutely enrapturing, the exposition is sweet and concise, theres no unnecessary info dumps, it builds itself so beautifully and im still wanting more. Ill be here for ever chapter from here on, thank you very much author.
This novel is quite similar to God Emperor. The writing is quite good. The MC is calm and intelligent, not like those MC from other reincarnation novels who unbelievably arrogant and stupid.WWuxia novels is enough if it is decent and this novel is quite decent
Hey author here I'm new I'm going to try to update new chapters frequently I'm sorry in advance if I maybe slow at updateing my novel I just thought of this novel from the top of my head if you like reading my novel please show me some love and support
Other than having a cheat like ability worth noticing, everything else is bad. It gets frustratingly worse with each chapter. The only good thing about this novel is that, the freedom and infinite possibilities laid out by cheat ability is smothered early on by the author. So, I didn't waste more time on this.
Get a editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.
it's a good novel if I do say so myself and I put a lot of hardwork into it I hope you all like it . Thank you very much. Also don't forget to vote cause I think that this novel will trend and I want you to be part of it's trend
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Thirty(ish) chapters in. There are a few errors in the translating (missing words, or words that sound similiar but mean something completely different), but the background of the world is well developed. Not a lot of character development going on for the main though. He seems static currently, while the supporting characters are growing.
