i pushed myself to read more than 120+ chapter and i can't continue anymore.
its seem MC lost some of his IQ each chapters and the main female has the worst personality, she remains of the main heroine from Zero no Tsukaima ...
Short Title : TBBDS
Alternate Title : 武功自动修炼：我在魔教修成佛皇
Status [Edit] : Ongoing
Author : Day per Ten Thousand
Genre :
Fantasy, Xuanhuan
disciple of the Demon Sect, with a martial arts system attached to him.
Any exercise can be practiced on its own once learned.
but:
“Because your blood-devouring magic power did not draw human blood, you were depressed and your cultivation regressed.”
“Your bones have broken the palm of your heart. Because you only kill chickens, ducks and fish, you are not satisfied, and there is no progress in your cultivation.”
“Your Qishaquan is very dissatisfied with your kind heart, and your cultivation is backward.”
“Your spirit ghost shadow step, because there is no fusion of the ghost power, the energy is insufficient, and there is no progress in cultivation.”
…
Looking at the system prompt, Lu Li had no choice.
So, he began to practice the right way exercises in Demon Sect.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
This story is incredible, please read more about this story. The gamers have to survive in an unknown world. Wow incredible. Good story keep it up
it's a grammatical mess, because it's translated to English with Google translator, you need a English editor or something else, ...........
at first, I thought the world setting might be apocalyptic with no nation every man on his own but in this novel china exists and of all the novel I read if china exist in the novel it's gonna be filled with nationalism and racism thus bye bye
it's prob translate and changed from the farming one with elves a week or so ago...............................................................
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There are not many books that attract readers through the synopsis but yours did. You were able to captivate my attention just by the first line of the synopsis. This is a beautiful work in progress, which I highly recommend.
You want me to read this up to chapter 20? The grammar is garbage, it is torture for anyone to read this.
Get an editor or something and we'll see then.
Thy do be Busting..... Keep up the awesome work. So far I'm loving her system it's unique and cool. The world building is also unique. can't wait to see where this goes