Dude i love this story so much like sooo much plzzz drop chapters as fast as possible also i dont have money to buy this book plzzz if anyone can gift me this book i will be Very thankfull to him i want this book like crazy i can live without this book plzzzzzzzzzzz if the author can give me free access or anyone can gift me this plzzz
Quite an interesting start. Hope to see more author
Okay, first of all, I'd just like to say this novel is amazing. I only usually read when I have the time and only read books that interest me, but this one grasped me and refused to let go. The story is on a very unique path and I am loving every minute of it so far. I'll detail everything step by step so readers know what they are getting into:
Writing Quality: At first, there were very minor mistakes, but as the author has noted, this was basically his first book. As you go up through the chapters, you will see the improvement in the writing skills. The author learns quickly and acts upon his mistakes as soon as he sees them.
Updating Stability: Author keeps his word. One chapter a day from Monday to Friday. Rarely does weekend chapters... Wish he did more (help me push him to do more weekend chapters please). Overall, honest about his updating stability and I'm yet to see him falter.
Story Development: This is simply amazing!! Especially when it comes on the MC Zane. I've seen a few people bash the author about his weak MC, but I'm telling you, the development Zane goes through is insane. Zane literally went from the nice, goodie, soft character to more like an anti-hero (maybe even a straight-out villain. Can't confirm yet, but I've seen evidence that may support my theory). What makes the development so great is that the author puts the MC through many situations, and has him make mistakes. These mistakes slowly take effect on Zane and eventually pushed him to a breaking point where he just loses it and transforms from an angel to a demon (figure of speech, not literally.)
Character Design: At first, the descriptions were kind of lengthy, however, the author has cut down on the descriptions. He ensures they aren't too vague, but also not overly descriptive. He leaves certain things to the reader's imagination which I like.
World Background: This is well done. The scenes are detailed enough to play out in your head like a movie, but we all know that not every scene can be perfect. There are a few parts that could have been written better, but again, it's his first book, so won't bash him for it. Either way, the background is vivid and flows nicely with the tone of the story.
Overall, the story is amazing. The development is insane and I look forward to more content. Please, please, please don't drop this book author! I would be so disappointed if I don't get to see how this all ends.
To other readers, if you love apocalypse books, this is one for you. It diverts from zombies and tackles a battle with intellectual life forms with humans at the bottom of the food chain. It's worth giving a shot. Trust me
Okay i decided to write a Review finally after i picked this novel up again because I love it. It was one of the first novels I ever read and I enjoyed it a lot
I was there from 50 chapter until now and the quality is still amazing keep up the good work
Thx that you continue to post again now
Its cool, but translation is horrible. im sure things would come put better if things were translated and edited properly, but i cant read it as is
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Loved the story. MC isn't a douche who only cares about getting in girls pants. The romance isn't unrealistic, the way MC gets girls is at least believable. The story is not just about sex. Overall author did a good job.
I've dropped this novel at the point when they are building the boat. I won't talk about the good parts of the story as they have been mentioned in many reviews, but only what i didn't like about it. First thing i didn't t like is the MC. His actions and they way he plays don't feel to me like an old mans at his 60s-70s, bases on how seriously he acts and plays the game. Secondly, the pacing of the story is bad. On the one hand, the story doesnt stay stagnant and things do happen, wether its crafting, fighting or interacting with people in the game(npcs or players). On the other hand, its ~200 chapters and the GAME is not even open for the public, and from some other review its not at ~400 chapters either. Lastly, i don't like the game you created. For me multiplayer games comes hand to hand with competition, whether thats pvp or getting a first clear on a dungeon. And your game destroys any chance of competition the further it goes. You have players with literally months of advantage before the game opens, 5 of them that are destined to be the best of the 5 elements of the game from the very start and then you get all 5 of them together to form a guild. How is anyone gonna compete with that? Moreover, the "slots" for the main questline are filled before even the game goes live.
The first plotline has to do about the war of two sides if dragons through their champions and 2 of the "good" ones have already been picked by chapter 200.
What made me drop the novel was that lack of fairness and chance for the general player to compete for any kind of lead in the game.
A decent read, however, the background is way too lacklustre. A lot of locations/organizations/mundane things are never really explained.
The first 20~ish chapters are also very bland which makes it hard to want to continue reading.
There are also some minor grammar/spelling mistakes.
Not a masterpiece but better than 60% of other novels of a similar genre.
Well i haveNt read tHe book Yet but since it for the xp here we are i hOpe it will be good tho so that i can enjoy anOther good novel on this well good luck authOr and please suprIse me
What is the raw version name.
Fun to read
The MC is just an ordinary guy who suddenly got transported into the middle of nowhere. He does get scared but he's decisive. Understandable.
Can't say much about the plot for now but his cheat is akin to having an RTS system in real life. He could recruit soldiers instantly and they even level up.
Looking forward to the reaction of the natives once they interact with the village.