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You haven't given credit to its original source, you haven't put the proper tags up and you for some reason haven't given it the proper cover. You could have thousands of readers thanking you for spreading the masterpiece but you just put all your effort into uploading.
However, it does bring a smile to my face that I can go and read my first ever Cultivation Novel. Thank you for the effort, keep it up.
The writing quality is fantastic and so descriptive! So far, the world-building has been really thorough.
Can't wait to see more! Keep it up!
With a glance, I could see Resident Evil and Fall Out’s concept, which is limitedly only okay for me. I will summarize why I gave 2 stars:
1. First of all, your way of putting the title is completely wrong, no one puts their TITLE in capital letters.
2. It’s kinda copycat regarding your plot, world background, even the Virus...
3. Grammar will be super unbearable for readers who pursue decent or better writing.
4. Your writing style is a mess.
5. You went premium too fast, normally, even the best story out there went premium around chapter 50-80, but yours is chapter 11.
I hope this constructive review can give you something to comtemplate and improve yourself - Sincerely, your fellow author.
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Author I am loving your novel I've read to chapter 120 but some areas stands out in your story the annoys me a bit. The part that annoys me is the Mc choices, he refuses at times to use his full power were it can help him avoid trouble or escape. He lets his emotions rule over him a lot, this is explained by his past but it still doesn't feel like he is gaining control over it or improving his control over his emotions. The novel is good and i would hate for you to stop or quit, keep up the great work.
overall nice read :)
story is going really smoothly (as far as i read), and although it's relatively calm pace i enjoy reading it.
maybe not to the point of binge reading (as it's setting its own pace) it in one go, but definitely reading it whenever you feel like it and want to relax :)
Lame
This is stupid in many ways. Petty I say. He should have died from the first chapter. For such a spineless bastard. Even if they made a stupid fucking mistake to him it was started because of his incompetent father.
He should have taken all his pettynes on him. Show results and represent an invisible profit and benefits to the (Kingdom.
But no he just have to be a Man-child. Taking unrealistic girls left and right.
Fucking rapist. This is why abortion is legal.
He does not take action and control to make a better world nor destroy it. Instead he just keep fucking around. Another parasite to be cleansed. Lower than the enemies he faced.
He took offense of such a childly ploy and instead of playing it off and be the bigger man, he fucking...
DAMN YOU AUTHOR. YOU ARE A CORROUSIVE CUM STAIN.
He is an immortal and the most powerful in this current "World". Proclaiming to be an Experienced Mother Fucker who has reincarnated for over seven hundered times (that is two times three hundred fifty Motha Facka). Experience being all archetypes. But still have an intellegence lesser than of an Ant. I hope those over seven hundred worlds are okay.
For an Immortal, he is a disgrace. A Pretentious Cunt. Having thoughts that he have done anything and to come up with such a childish ploy, WHAT A JOKE! HIM being called a Bastard not because of him being born of an affair but him being such a dickhead, is a great name for him for he is such a Dick Waffle.
Really, why have you taken this route.
it's a ok story cause the internet is filled with same kinda stories which are plotted batter so yeah a three star story but very slow progressing
This book already seems good from the beginning. I like these kind of stories, I tend to read for 18 hours a day almost. So I intend to benge read.
It starts with the cliché of someone hurting him and he can't do anything... are you dirty? Can such a wound be considered an attempted murder, and the police or the government do nothing? says he barely has money when he could have sued both the other guy's master and the one who attacked him. and then the cliché of playing the game without knowing what to do that his sister gave him starts, I've read many with the same script (literally the same) congratulations for your creativity
I have to say, this story is clearly on point!The whole description is enough for one to fantasize it just so we can get an idea of the scenery.Writing quality is ??I'm hoping for more chappies author ?