I think this a good read. I will put this on my reading list.
I love the characters so far especially Hollow's personnality and his mysterious identity. The story looks very original and i really like the mix between sci-fi and ancient Babylon.
Man, I love this concept. An immortal practicing magic. So far, the writing is good and the way the author describe the scenery, the characters, and cultivation seems better to me than other novels I've read. But I feel a bit stiff when reading it, just a bit. It's like, it's too good that it's too bad? Or mechanical like the other guy said? In short, when reading this novel, I feel like something's missing. I just hope the novel gets better the later the chapters.
Anyway, I'm definitely reading this one.
The story have potential, great plot and well detailed description, but it would be much easier to read if you space the paragraphs. But it's a great story and I highly recommend.
This novel is incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.
Leaving a decent review requires a decent novel. Which this doesn't qualify as....then again, I've read worse.
Compared to most of the novels in this genre this is completely average copy-paste.
MC is handed everything on a silver platter, women are nothing but cute background noise, face slapping happens regularly and the MC takes to violence like a starved sociopath in a country that appear to have neither law nor government oversight.
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The patriotism is very blatant, but it doesn't affect the novel much. (I'm quite numb to this by now).
After chapter 58 and onwards it turns to fanning hate, stereotyping and talk of race. (Normal patriotic behavior, nothing new to most of us cynical readers).
If you have nothing else to read and can look past the the more unsavory and illogical parts, it's okay.
Wishfulfilment at its best or worst, take your pick.
This was an amazing fan fiction and and isekai'd in Narutoverse thats cool , I like how you give the readers to choose whatever they want to name weapons and things , Well I will surely want to read more keep going
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The writing style could use some work, but other then that this story is great! I can honestly say I kept getting suprised by the author as to what was going to happen next to the MC, which is something rare to find on here. The story itself is very interesting, and stands out.
I can't wait to read on and see what happens and just exactly what occurred in MCs past.
Kudos to Author!
I really enjoyed reaading it.
Read til chapter 362
translation is readable, but you do get annoyed when names alternate between English and Chinese, and the English name varies. but ok
story is developing in a predictable, but very much enjoyable, manner.
not very sure about characters, but have not found a flaw personally.
updates are good , 3 chapters per day.
i would say the world background is what is somewhat predictable after a certain point, but i would say it is satisfactory well done.
worth a read, personally gonna keep reading for a while more as far as i can see.
though the translation quality does ruin the enjoyment a bit.
there are a lot of things i like and a lot i dislike about this novel i'll start with likes as bullet points
-the MC is smart and decently strong and stays pretty strong throughout
-i really like the shamelessness of the MC its really funny
-the chapters are really long it feels well thought out so while it says over 1000 chapters you really get a lot for that 1000+
negatives
-everything has a story and the author must tell you the story of everything(example: theres a guy about to stab the MC with a sword, it goes and starts talking about the guy, who he is, what his childhood till this point was like, what he likes and dislikes and why you should care about him. then it talks about the backround of the sword what it likes and dislikes why you should care about it and how cool of a sword it really is. you can actually skip 10+ chapters in most of the fights and come back with the sword still about to stab the MC)
-filler plot. he loves to tell you on the spot why things matter this story is 99% filler. i can describe the whole 700+ chapters i have read in a few sentences if i ignore the filler.
-personality change: early on in the very first few chapters they introduce the female lead, shes bratty, smart, spoiled, vindictive, strong and likes to smiles alot and talk and laugh at you. she is out to get the MC. later the author decides he doesn't think she should be like this so now she is. quiet, rarely smiles, cold beauty, loving. and the author makes another girl who has her original personality to replace her.
-translation quality is low, you can read and understand it most of the time but there are tons and tons of errors (translator thinks Gift of gap is the saying instead of GAB) this goes on for many many chapters. tons of random words missing or the totally wrong word in its place.
overall i read 700+ chapters and by read i mean i skipped 1 out of every 10 chapters (so around 70 total) because the filler was getting to me. i will never finish this i can't read more filler anymore but it was a good way to kill a week of isolation.