Very good story, the univers is interesting and well written. Hope the novel will continue for a long time.
Characters are endearing.
The mc is good even if I find it a little too passive at the beginning.
But I NEED SOME DUNGEON!!@! PLZZ LET MC CLEAR A LOTSS DUNGEOONNNNSSS!!!
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I love the flow and development of this book. the characters are so entertaining and keeps me wanting to read more. the book is edgy and thrilling!
it's been 6 months where are u author tell .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. ... .. don't drop this novel it's good damit
Great read H bbbb.
Gets boring in the late phase (~200 chapters) No proper fighting or cultivation just excavate world to make your own world that's the storyFull story relys on divine stone and coins tree ???????????????
uh, this is a story that makes the brain work. a story about the dark underworld, the writing is really cool, the plot is also very curious. good job author! I'm waiting for the next part!
This is very nice book and I must say the Author really did a great job! The first chapters captured my attention and the book cover is eye-catching.
Hello. This is my first novel. Hope that you like it. If you have any suggestions or comments. I would love to listen. Thank you.
No very good repetitive.
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Love it pls continue and have motivation to write more quickly thx for the entertainment thx
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This is sad....
Sad that such a good story has yet to be recognized, honestly this is well written the character development is well, its emotional with drama. The character development is well balanced..slow and yet not too slow. Plus, the [possible ] love interest is not some slutty or unrealistic character [love at first sight...****]. ALso The MC is quiet interesting.
Suggestion:
-There is too much secrets..kinda annoying..[ex: the secret family of the MC, the characters past] try to reveal them.
-I personally ship MC and fait together..make it sweet and fluff, add some romance..[just dont make fait some korean style female lead that was used by her previous lover and then abandoned..in fact no previous lovers at all...! I'm begging no korean style tragic angst ****..keep this happy]. The beautiful maiden...Lady fate came and saved her beloved mortal..-Get it?
-Bash..yep I want some bash..bash MC's past fiance/family...[I mean they werent there when he was broken] and no redemption..just straight up bash and they regret it.
-Dont make Nev and her brothers past angsty..just sad.
-This might sound weird but in the later chps make MC start a family with love interest..maybe 3 kids..
Anyway I said my piece...love your stuff,,i do hope more people read this...also dont make this angsty/tragic/korean style [NO offense to koreans but most of their romance is rape/betrayal/separation...cheating and then back together..total ****]..try to keep this happy and fluff and romantic..we all need some romance in our lives.
Good luck and Good show.