Greetings all! This is the author of V.I.R.A.L, nearly four months ago I gave a review for my book, giving people a rough idea of what the story was going to be about. A lot has changed then with two more volumes and the fifth one well on its way. Because of this, I wanted to update my review to be in line with the, what I believe, is the quality of the book.
Much of the points I put through with that review still stand. A slowish pace character-focused superhero story with multiple main characters. This will not change as it's my characters that really carry the story, don't just take my word for it, others reviews agree, and while the story is now really kicking off, I'm only under halfway through the story I want to tell.
The other problems people had with this story I've tried my best to fix, I've gone over each chapters improving the grammar and spelling mistakes to the best of my abilities! (There will still be spelling mistakes, of course, I'm one person) which will make for an easier reading experience. I've also added small changes and additions to the first few chapters to give a more exciting beginning and an insight into the world my story take place in.
Speaking of world-building. I've made it my absolute goal to make my story a living breathing one you can believe in. Although it only takes place in serval locations, I believe that I've really built up the backstory and history of my world into one of wonder and mystery waiting to be explored over the last few volumes. With the main threat teased through the book well on its way, I'm more excited than ever to keep building the story and history of this world for you all to read.
Lastly, I want to thank everyone for reading; if it weren't for you, I wouldn't be able to improve my book the way I have. I'm always looking for ways to make the best story possible, and any criticism is always appreciated, and I love every review and comment made. So as of today, this is my definitive review that will be on the front page until the last chapters. The first review I gave my book 3.8 stars which I thought was fair at the time of the story. But now with more chapters, world-building, character development and grammar checks, I can happily give myself 4.4 stars. I hope both new and old readers keep up with this ever-growing story through 2021 and beyond!
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I like how the story has developed and look forward for more of the story. The only faults I can point out is some grammatical errors. Iliketbate
Definitely a new thought ?I see cultured content, I give 5?It's good to see change from all that demons or monsters or pets...looks like a slice of life but still a mystery..?Looking forward to reading it ☺️
So far I have to give this a good rating. the game seams realistic but not overly so. My only complaint is just mine. I do not like overly optimistic Mcs. So long as the story progress, and the mc gets a little more down to earth, like when selling the dagger in ch3. I will spend a lot of time keeping track of this story.
The moment you start reading it, you are presented with death so disgusting it makes you wanna puke. The writing style is good and the mystery is yet to be solved. The characters are equally amazing. Would love to see more of Zach and Odette. Need to add this to my library so I could know the culprit!
A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
A must read if you've read quite a few xianxia. This one's a really like reeeeeeeeally good parody/comedy!!!....................................................
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