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good work,
but try to not end this prematurely like your other tho, some of them feels too rushed both in character development or the story progress itself.
this one have far wider range of possibility, to try to not messed it up
Mc gets gold finger and starts an era of face slapping and being a great god of players(ofc he don't need to do anything gold finger nd plot armor do it all for him...).
TQ; its ok 5/5
SoU: its new novel 5/5
SD: its just face slaping and gold finger 2/5
CD: what character... its just book about op gold finger and awed girls(in first 7chapter you can see childhood friend and loli). 2/5
WB: what world building... other then a new gold finger its just boring like all other low quality novels of this kind. 2/5
Cooljsununubunubunububunununubbubububububububbubnynu. Idk. ....................................................................................
honestly this book kinda confusing there is to many event in one arc and it kinda have tie one another.and very slow pacing for the main arc.
for the 1st 10 chapter i was like :
"what is this , what's happening, why ? what's the focus for this arc"
then got curious and keep reading then finding this quite funny. though the plot armor really thick in this one.
quite similar with IRAS but MC only want money not Fame then runaway to have fun or vacation
if you want to read this prepare to read at least 40 chapters to understand its charm
at least you Will got few laugh or smile since a lot of chapter quite funny .
and like they said curiosity killed the cat.
i just curious how the mc future with that personality .thats why i hope this book get continue
What an empty space he feels. I really relate to his pain but it's kind of hard to make Rihanne stay and I don't think he will ever forget the pain.
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from what I could see, this story was very good and very cool, using Fate characters was great, I would love to have other stories with Fate characters in anime
I sincerely hope that this will be updated again
C17
Please make the MC smarter and more mature, or at least polite. I know he was a bigshot, but its irritating he keep cutting off someone else dialogue. he is exactly a muscle head just like how he describe his first disciple survivor.
Other than this only problem, the whole story is very interesting.
