This novel is a great concept and it starts off rather strong but overtime it tries to do too many things at once.The MC is given a rather difficult and demanding Job without any experience or training and he is given no time to learn anything because the system forces him to start recruiting students. The students are interesting and have good backrounds. They are 3D and they have a unique aspect to each of them. The MC can’t actually teach them anything important becuse hes even less knowledgable then the students. He realizes this and spends a couple months learning only to come out with very little development. He didn’t train actively and he only read books. This would be ok if the mc learned anything substantial but he didn’t and then the system forced him to go out into the world as himself which inevitably leads to battle. So after all of this time he has to rely on temporary power to do basically nothing on his own. anything interesting is done by the system. That is my greatest critique the novel up until chapter 41( a few hours of reading) The system is more of the mc than the actual mc is. the system Isn’t on the side supporting the mc when they cant learn or understand something on there own, The system literally does Everything for the mc. Recruits students, forces mc to gather recourcrs, gives Mc temporary power, and forces the mc to fix an issue that it caused in the first place. It cant expect to give dark powers, why would it do that in the firsr place just to kill a group of people?, to a regular guy and expect him to use it responsibly. Maybe if the mc Didnt have to learn how to do his job, earn the credentials for his job, do his job, and also be a regular person, he couldve dealt with it ealrier if the system told him. The MC is supposed to be a headmaster but hes in control of notthing and that hasnt changed after 40 chapters.
Her lies the rambles of a madman.I was around chapter 20 i gave up yup i gave up. Its to slow paced and nothing really happens. Ex: spends 4-6 chapters trapped inside shell/clam all he does is absorb, then gets out and eaten by a bird and guess what he is now trapped in its stomach and all he does is absorb. Wth do something. Of course if you like snail pace this is for you. It might be good but its a pain to keep reading chapters wher he does the same thing as the last 2-3 chapters.Kinda like dragon ball just lots of less action and takes longer to do any thing.
I just hope everyone enjoys my story. Any advise on my writing or story work is well appreciated and all criticism only helps me get better at writing. Any links to useful information or other novles, leave them in the comments or in a review.
what kind of novel is this? reincarnation? or just vmmorpg? or xianxia?//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
rip of let me game in piece , I want authors to have at least some creativity but nah he dito pasted the concept and the way just tweaked the names and removed some similarities I would wish this rather not get picked
Haahaaa....Just the synopsis is already enough to spend time in this novel.I'm showing my support for you author.. keep going..??????????????????????????
Ilol the author must be high kekrkrrkkekekrkrkrkrrkrk
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Website : qidian china Views : 11.89 million Rating : 8.4(2607) Chapters : 1168Status : completed Word count : 3.78 million author rank : platinum
The idea is good but the gramma is bad. When u read it u think of school boy writing the story. The writer begins nearly ever, and sentence with he or she which is pretty annoying
Not a bad novel but no strengh ranking is confusing it's like wuxia without cultivation i really coudln't understand if moves they used were powerfull weak or averange
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