~CH. 65The score should actually be a bit higher but the variables are equally distributed, I should give it 4.5.It is a great story, but I didnt see any Kingdom building except a bit from the prince. If you look for a slow pacing adventure (as much as I can tell now), it is good.The MC is... what can I say, dont really reflect his experiences as someone who lived for 364 reincarnations. The stutter and undeciveness inbetween is really more or less showing someone who had one life time and that is it, and as such I see him.The side characters are fine. World building too etc. What is really really annoying is the really slow pacing, I mean reaaaaaally slow. If you like reading 5 or so chapters about how they fight for one night, be my guest but I can not or how they sit and talk...And I already jumped multiple chapters because it is soooo slow. I can see for what it is and as such, I greatly appreciate it but nothing for me and there is almost no Kingdom building.
Its a good novel, kinda fast but it takes a while to really get good plot wise
I love the novel story development and world building is great and I absolutely love the MC and how well it is written
I have read till 45th chapter and have to say the grammar in this novel isn't preferable. I know this novel is made after the novel "I became a second generation villain"(which is a great novel 100% recommended).But the author of this novel has poorly displayed the plot. there are many plotholes but that can be ignored if you have patience. And the most disappointing thing is the "villain" is turning more into a protagonist.I don't know after chapter 45 but it has been mostly disappointing to me.Certain acts dosent suit a VILLAIN.Also the dialogues of supporting characters are too trash.I won't say anything anymore.But i bet this wouldn't quench your thirst for VILLAINS.
Hey to be frankly your novel is a good one in fact I got remembered one of my favourite novel by reading this but please just please keep updating regularly and if you are unable to do so for some reasons just let us know so when we can expect it otherwise you will risk losing your fans
The beginning of the story is the stage of the true magician, the life span is 1000 years, then it became 500 years, and after one chapter it became 250 years. When you set rules for the world, you must not change them in every chapter.
Author here, and this is not a shameless review. Not a proper review either. Basically, this is not a review. This is important information for my current readers, and future readers.Note: I have decided to remove all chapters, and re-upload them again while reducing the word count from 3k words to 1,5k words minimum. And then to 2k minimum after a hundred chapters or so.Hopefully, this will only take a day, if not just two days. Thank you.
I feel like some parts could be written better.I think the cover will probably not draw in as much readers.Overall, it's a good novel, looking forward to more!
The Writing Quality is good but can be improved ( not that i am an expert :P ) the Story development is going fast for now which i like and the world background is also unique as there are also monster with intelligent life and have their own way to live just like humans.The Characters are swords as you can see from the title which is unique imo.Good luck in your journey Author. xD
Absolute piece of shit novel don't give it a chance hope it fails in sick of fucking reading these piece of shit novels with worthless nonsense face slapping bullshit. Completely unrealistic even in a fantasy novel. MC think theyr low-key smart planners but are actually cowardly cucks who aren't decisive enough to have their servents that's right servants fired. sSeriously if every family had servants who are allowed to freely disturb the family from awakening everyone would be a useless waste. shit novel I'm so pissed I read something which put me in this mood hope this novel fails. Fuuuuck
@R_F_T_S Going through your book, I remembered I have once reviewed it before. But it wouldn't hurt to review again. You have used a technique which is beautiful especially when you are describing the fighting scenes. What can I say, I admire your bold step in writting a book even out of your own culture. This Signaled to me that you have really done a lot of research to come up with this great work.
It's super cool. Read IT