Amazing Novel Writing Quality is very Good Story Development is out Class Good Story Development ?????????????????????????????????????
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I was a bit confused at first, but the story line draws you in. Adam seems to be making the best of his situation. Period and comma placement could use some work, but all in all; Great Story! Keep up the good work Author!
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I like the idea of a new Touya with the quirk of his mom. I like fanfictions like this because it breaths in a new feeling and shows new developments in the future.It is also slow for my taste but is not boring. I am looking forward for more...Keep up the great work author san!!
Very nice story Pankaja. Good going...... Eagerly waiting for your next chapter. I like reading mysterious stories. Keep it up......... Eager to know about that call of Sophia.
Everything sounds great continue the good work hun, it doesn't stop right here for you do donf lose hope in finishing what you created because it's a good look from my perspective yeah???
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Me encanta este tipo de novelas, donde el personaje principal vuelve al pasado para cambiar el futuro y sobretodo cuando es el apocalipse. Ademas se une el BL, me flipa.
I actually liked how well written the grammar and the word choice were. I also liked how realistic this is. The only thing that I don't like is the mc himself. why? reason one, he got kicked out of the reincarnation circle because of love... like come on. Reason two, his personality since he is too kind and too naive. dude he hed reincarnation 360 times and he hed seen a king touring children and women, yet he did nothing but he still couldn't hold himself when an elf is getting raped. ??
15 Chapters in and only one fight. The plot is slow but the characters are fleshed out well.The only reason why I am reading this novel even though the battle scene are so less is because of the unique personalities and features of the character. You got to add more battle scenes!!!!!! Or say goodbye to me, your loyal reader.
it can be a bit clunky at times with weird story development and things that literally come out of nowhere but it is a pretty good story and worth reading.