Very interesting book. It is very interesting and deep. Liked the way the author stitched the story together with a lot of interesting and magical stuff. This is one of my favorite book so far. Good luck author
It's a disappointment. LOHP was not that good either, but this is definitely bad. The whole thing is lacking creativity. I hesitated to start reading it because the synopsis was not interesting. I decided to read it after some time and got what I expected... I feel like the author burned out and just pushing the mainstream thing to get money.
ALRIGHT! I have read till the latest chapter and it blows my mind how the system of the game works. It feels like the game itself is interesting without the story and the plot. With how real the game is, I'm hooked by this story. Very nice job author! Please release more while I'm waiting for your other novels updates :)
Hi, glad to be the first one to give you a review, good work on the story development, I just want to point out some things, even if it is a work in progress give it a shot on the synopsis, be playful, creative, and then don't worry about grammar correction for now.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
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I've read to chapter 36 so far. you know alot of people might not like this novel because of the slow pace compared to other trial reads but it's actually pretty interesting. we do not know much about the world yet but we know that the mc is not in a game but in a different world type situation. The mc is smart but not evil like in many novels. I really look forward to see where this novel goes.
Cool idea! I have never though of it like that! The characters are developing so finely and I can read it for all day since I like the story of galaxy.
Anytime I read this I always imagine myself as the main character. It's really lit. Keep it up bro
I tried to read on, but at the end of chapter 16 and I couldn't take it anymore.
the MC, despises himself on a level that makes me feel bad.
Romance is literally complete rubbish, the girl idealizes it for a vision she had as a child, she meets him as a child and something happens that makes her lose the memories of any interaction with her.
the mc realizes that he has parts of his memories blank and nobody explains anything to him about why or what happened to make this happen and the girl knows it and still does not explain anything and continues to idealize it to fit her vision. I drop the novel
Love this short but awesome scp fanfic! you dont find many of these that are actually good. pls continue. love the story and I dont want to see it disappear
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