The story is goooooodd HAHAHAHAHAHAHHABWOANWPWNQOABUDBEUWBSJD
just making sure I reach 140 characters HAHABQOQBQPSBIENEOX
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Definitely potential, but let's see where the author is going to take us.
by the way, I am the author of this novel. I am here just to post a comment and see if I can find it by search.
I love this book. You are always keeping us all on the edge of our seats! Enjoy reading your materials! You definitely put a spin on chapter 6!! I couldn’t believe what I was reading!!!
good work. there is lack of LotM fanfics on this platform. hope you don't drop ... a suggestion of mine would be to post this fanfic in the fanfiction section instead of novels section to increase the readership. fanfics in the novels section rarely get any attention
Excellent work of author. I love the world in this book. Excellent plot and characters design. Easy to read. Will recommend to everyone. This book is so good. Can’t wait for the next chapter to release. Author keep up your good work. You’re great author. ??
Bruh Dragons in this Novel talk about balance but then kill for no reason other then their hurt pride thousands of years ago?u200d♂️??????????
buduh budbubum I'm loving it at least I like it but I'm pretty sure I'm
TRUE REVIEW CH900* filled with numerous useless info- every ch half content filled with loots detail.. garbage info dump to make nos. and he does this for everyday of mc..*story line tooo fast- in just a month mc has become super duper powerful person and his territory has become super large...*no time skips everyday life details given..like I said I think not even 6 months has gone by and he is super boss of human race..*he gets same no of troops daily he does the same thing daily but author has to give this info dump in every ch..even if he earns a single core author mentioned it..
The same story that you can read on a large number of Chinese novel.
I honestly don't like the author's writing's style.
Not worth reading...
Fellow Pinoy here! Anyway, I've only read a few chapters, but here's my review on it.
Things to improve:
First off, there is an obvious approach to action and since it's a zombie novel, it is a must to have action-filled chapters. However, although the author does try to execute this, it can fall flat. Maybe it's because there's not much the readers know about Nile himself, or what even drives him. If it is simply for survival, then the narratives and descriptive words should be improved on more to elicit the right emotions.
Good points:
The author knows where the story is supposed to go, and Nile's actions are logical. It's also interesting to know there are "interesting zombies", which might be a turning point for the story.
To conclude, it's a good story with an easy-to-read format. It can be a good zombie novel and holds potential.