Complete trash after 200 chapter oh and just as bonus nationalism; chapter 237 was even deleted why? In this chapter mc killed Nancy Pelosi when he reached super puper lvl
Me gusta musho la historia, los personajes, la trama y el desarrollo. Me gustaría que hubieran más capitulos .me encantan las novelas de el mundo del entretenimiento y los sistemas.
Either select the book, or deliver the raws, it's all in deal, just do it fast.
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Fang yuan is the most righteous mc I’ve ever seen. He never (doesn’t) asks for anything in return after doing a good deed. He treats women with respect and equality (by feeding them to bears and then eating the bear). And he shows boundless tolerance towards those who inconvenience him (obliterates their whole clan and spares not even the children). I’ve never respected anyone more in my entire life. *behind the scenes with fang yuan pointing a gun to my head* good job but did you think I didn’t notice those hidden messages? Me: no please spare me! I’ll do anythi- *bang* *crunch as fang yuan proceeds to not even let my soul escape as he eats it and uses it for nourishment* Fang yuan: “read this novel or you’ll end up like this guy”
absolute garbage. clearly just the most generic and low effort writing. thinks having meaningless conflict for the sake of conflict and nothing more is actually a good thing. disgusting.
It's a pain to read with all the info dumping, but you can overlook that with skimming skills, the real problem aside from the slow pace and the story getting a little bit boring because of that, it's the translation. It's just switched like that to MTL shamelessly after the pay wall. I don't get the logic behind that. Shouldn't the premium chapters be even more quality!
i have a felling this won't be just a typical read. imagine epic fights for books. if they ead alot then the villians and all that will be smart.
hurrah!!!!!
-Writing Quality-
I do not believe you are a native English speaker, you're doing well so far with the writing portion; However, in concern to the quality, I do believe it could use some improvement. Author, you're making grammatical errors even some 2nd graders ( Begging of Elementary School) do not make, even so, these are small mistakes that lead to larger issues. Better to clip them at the source and fix them early on, they're just relatively small mistakes, only there are a bunch of them.
-Stability of Updates-
It is far too soon to right on this, but from what I surmise, the updates are regularly implemented into the list. This is decent, it is good to have frequent updates. In comparison, do not "blow your steam", take your time writing the novel. When taking a break for whatever reasons, inform your audience.
-Story Development-
Personally I like slow and methodical writing, this is one of them. Detail is a huge boost to any story, and you my author friend, have a size-able amount. It flows well into the next chapter like water to a gorge.
-Character Design-
Just as I stated previously, it is good to have detail. Your characters do not lack this detail, from the get-go you describe them in a appropriate manner. Although we have not seen many characters, I get a feeling I'll be seeing many more interesting supportive casts.
-World Background-
Author friend, you have put a decent amount of world building and cleared the fog away from a map I envisioned of what appears to be your world. Like the other two, story development and character design, you have done well to describe and appropriate features to your world most do not. Stay on this path and improve.
Sincerely, Entitled.
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ok, honest review: it's a good read, the MC is not the naive type, dumb and with a sense of heroics, he already lived a life where he saw the evils of the world so we are not going to worry mostly about character development, he has a logical golden finger although there are many mysteries but not very important for now but uncomfortable .in conclusion it is a good recommended reading with its parts of lemons, I hope it continues to rise more.
This story is great good grammar and the author uploads frequently the only thing that sucks is that I have to pay to read more I’ m broke so sucks to be me
A ****** stress free romance novel. A good weekend read. Not too long, easy writing, uncomplicated storyline and smooth writing.
Suitable for reading while lounging by the pool or such.
Enjoy!