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i can be a good novel.....honestly i didn't get it now WN is only using MTL and it is so difficult to understand what is going on specially in stories like this......i felt like i lost the story around ch 7 or 8
So, how do I start?
This novel is written quite nicely, even though there are a few improvements that can be done. Nevertheless, this writer has never ceased to put more and more effort in his novels. Can’t wait to see what happens next for this one.
This is an entertaining read, with well thought out characters and world. i like that it pushed the limits of the conventional expectations explores contemporary elements
Overall the story is a winner, its a shame the author seems to have quite writing. The two main characters have a good relationship and other characters aren't just mentioned then discarded. the story is told from two different perspectives Sam/James, sometimes a 3rd, the good thing about this is its not reshowing a scene but continuing the story in the others perspective. so you can see the emotions of the main characters.
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loving the work. ???????I hope author can explain more about the what type of snake Hiro is...and maybe about his past? anyway keep up the amazing work ??
This is a great novel about MC who was a loser but after he got his power after a accident he became a public sector then promote.This is a story a little Bit of Romance...
I love the story so much
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Hi, have the following comments and hence dropping it as it is different than what I initially thought.
1. The MC is shown has smart and cautious character, but he is anything but that. In fact many times, he just acts like a madman and then tries to justify the action through some reasoning. Maybe the author intends it to be this way, but this is not my cup of tea. For instance, he goes way back to the capital to save his friend from people with too high cultivation, when he could have intercepted and saved him whilst he was escorted to the capital. And in the end, the friend dies. .
2. The MC is shown to be smart, learned and talented with amazing comprehension. But when he wants to unlock a storage ring which is usually through sense/qi/blood, he goes to a competitor and owes him a favour for telling him to use blood to open the ring.
3. The brotherhood of the MC and dog is very forced. Usually the development of such bond between the characters should be smooth and felt by the readers, but here the author just keeps on harping about friendship every other paragraph for many chapters to come.
The book has a great start and the writing quality is well detailed and nice. I'm looking forward to more chapters as im left hooked with what im reading so far.... hehe
First and foremost, I strongly recommend this book! (As of writing, I am only chapter 26 in, but it seems the book has started very recently).
Pro's: 1. World building: The author thus far has built the world in a way I consider refreshing compared to other novels I have read. Instead of information dumping everything from the get go, we are "shown" rather than "told". From reading I am able to pick up the state of their dystopian society based upon several interactions early on in the book. (the homeless man beaten, the mutated animals, the