Damm.... It's good.... I like how the mc is being developed and hope to a good backstory btw ml and fl....... Also release more chapters ....
Overall a good until I have read...
Though the characters are too many, the developed really well and I learned to love or hate each one. The world they are in felt too real. I hope this gets even more exciting as the story goes......
Any reviewer who can tell this lost soul what this novel is about and get +100 Goodwill from yours truly.
Wow the novel is really goood ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I hate to say this but this is a fanfic it is almost a copy of a certain other novel on this website slightly different but so far very similar
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I had waited for something like this keep it up........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Nothing happens in the first 30 chapters. I'm not joking. Sure he gets his ability but the author spends so much time just galivanting and increasing word count that nothing happens. Just when you think he's going to start being a merchant he wastes more time at other things. Don't waste your stones.
Very basic beginning, but that's fine. What isn't is the Gary Sue MC who has no emotional baggage despite being traumatized at 12, constantly bullied, and oh, trains with no goal or motivation, not even sadness or to escape from his predicament. You know the guy who at 15 looks all muscular because his parent casually mentioned excercise once, the guy who never hurts anyone because "good guy is lawful good, not hormonal teenager," and of course, is always upbeat.