Does anyone know the update frequency for chapters?
So glad to see one of my favorite webnovel authors come back after all this time!
This book story is good The start is unique compared to others bookBut even if the world is of fantasy how can the MC start talking and playing before 1yrs old u r growing him too fast You should have time skip But book is good waiting for more update
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Only a few chapters to review but the story will already get you hooked. Not to forget the cover tho. .. Author is known for his other book. ..'I reincarnated as a stick', I hope this one will become more famous than that book.
The books not bad but the essence of it is missing took more than 11 chapter to chase an evil cultivator for which was a waste then there's the toad of all the fierce beasts out the his first is a toad I mean how are we suppose to take him serious. Well they haven't even entered the sect and he's already disadvantaged the toad grows so so so so slow Gamabunta would have been awesome
My review matches Kage36Aldarion. I found the premise excellent. The characters are likable and relatable. But the inconsistent world building, non-existent survival logic, abuse of the system for everything, having satellites survive a solar flare, and having no seed stock to start with despite six months to prepare and many more illogical premises ruin the general story for me.Finally the story got too ruined for me within the first chapters with the major plot hole when he first gets back from being interrogated he has Internet Connection running at his lair despite his local satellite receiver Core he made having being stolen. The story has too harsh of lags in continuity that ruin it for me. I couldn't convince myself to keep paying for chapters after I had to spend coins on them after chapter 20.Good novel idea. Needs rewritten with editorial input and a physics/astronomers advice for hard sci-fi! Hard Sci-Fi is a demanding genre. Not easy, as you need to make a full database and writing bible for all the rule modifications in your world to maintain story continuity.
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It's a pretty bleh story. The writing isn't so great and although that is understandable for non native speakers, I'd have to say that the lack of character development, plot, and world design especially ruin it. A recent trend has been sloppily throwing things from popular fiction into a system and making the MC OP. It's easy to do, but the outcome absolutely sucks especially if there is no good contextual world and plot development. And the MC? An okay choice but the flawness of his emotions and personality are serious, making him a flat one dimensional "edgy" ****.I'm not really going to talk about OPness and realism as novels vary in the flavor, mood and focus. Novels with OP systems usually compensate the lack of rich plot with character development or humor. Author needs to find some aspect that is their own, that they can maximize the appeal of to the readers.My suggestion would be to go back and produce a coherent plot, flesh out the characters by 500%, and most of all, at least describe the things and "evolutions" with enough depth so that it isn't just "oh hey, I had X tool which conveniently solves this current problem." I think the merit of the novel currently is exploration, specifically with what is the next evolutions? This definitely could be a possible way of improving the novel, and I leave it up to the author to try and improve it in his own way.
Anyone know the raw name? ...