I love revenge stories, I'm excited to keep reading
This is more like an 'inspired' novel from⁷ "Birth Of the Demonic Sword" from the dragon fight to the guards teaching him, all of it. Being inspired by a novel and making your own base on that is completely fine, but getting completely influenced is also bad. Your novel just feels like another iteration of "BoDS" it's insane how similar it is. Just from reading this i already know you're a big fan of "BoDS" This is more like a fanfic than anything. Sorry but except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability, I'll give the others a one star. I hope you can carve your own mold someday.
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it's good to read at night before sleep ??????? ooo
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The first impression I got from reading this book was how clean the writing style was. With the perfect blend of words and a very intriguing plot. The supernatural and underworld are always interesting topics and top it off with mages and an anti-magic power ML, it all comes together very nicely. So far I have loved the character designs, they are three-dimensional, and one can see their individuality. The book holds a lot of promise and I would love to see in which direction the writer takes it. A perfect blend of mystery and fantasy it is so far. Updates are stable and the chapter length is just the right amount. Fantasy readers should give this one a chance. Good luck author, all the best for the future.
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Mc is pretty stupid but the story is okay, stupid as in his system literally has no data, he ask a question and system says it needs more data, mc says its useless , he sleeps with one girl and is surprised to find out she wasn't doing it because she fell for him but because she's training a technique ??u200d♂️. he's not just the brightest but still okay ig
am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon..great job author!
one of the best ones I've read so far. A must read.
This is one of the best cultivation novel I've recently read. Good character development, excellent word buliding, unique systems, cool fights, op mc along with op enemies and many more. And also clear explanations on cultivation, different races, man this novel is excellent. I so hope that the author won't drop this novel.