MC spent 3 years of his life as an unsuccessful blacksmith. He had done nothing notable aside from that.Basically, he had been living like a non-entity in those 3 years. There was a girl that was in love with him for no reason, other than her having spent some time with him.Things only came ‘alive’ after he awakened his cheat; suddenly the girl decided to be intimate with him, suddenly some mook started finding trouble with him, suddenly there were assassins targeting him.His personality is bland. It was mentioned that he transmigrated, but he did not have the maturity and unique mindset of a person from Earth. His transmigration is probably just a set up for the existence of his cheat, nothing would really change in the plot even if he’s a native.As for the plot, most of the time he’s forging weapons, and when he’s not forging, he’s fighting, or some characters would bother him...no problem with that, but it would get boring later because the MC has no other feature that could make him attractive to readers, aside from his cheat perhaps.You can just treat this like a generic xianxia novel, be it the plot pattern or the MC's personality, just in a western setting.
I saw some sentence similar Google Translate.Example , In Chapter 49 - Liu Yan casually kicked Li Hao and chuckled.””This woman, stay away from me!Isn't it supposed to ''this woman , stay away from her''?And also Chapter 49 name is ''The superpower territory(3)''But Chapter 48 name is ''The superpower realm(2)''.????? Isn't so similar to GT?I think translator use help from GT?
Every chapter after 87 is privleged. I'm not paying stones for the "privlege" of paying the translators paycheck.Unless you want a paywall don't read this.
The mc is incredibly ignorant and the story feels too forced. Some how the Heavenly Dao is unable to broadcast to the whole planet and everyone but the mc is in range of the heavenly Dao. Even though heavenly Dao couldn't broadcast to mc it could still send the rewards? Good luck.
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This is one of the best if not the greatest novel for all the Men of culture, This author has good grasp with his words and does great job describing things, and I don't even want talk about how this author guy thinks of such impeccable bull **** to get his way around girls, I mean "trouser snake" your are the one true genius of cultural practices, I'm looking forward to more and just for change possess a chick and have her grow penis with some sort of skill he gets, it'll be more easier to get other girls and it'll be like having a yaoi in the story, just suggestions man, I mean who doesn't like lesbian ****
NGL these ppl are eating this as if it's a serious novel... I've seen tons of reviews that review it as if it's trying to have a complex story and deep character etc... at least from what I've read, this is supposed to be a mostly light hearted comedy. when I read it i ignored a lot of flaws because, the purpose doesn't seem to be him growing stronger etc as the main focus, it's mostly focused on the humor and comedy, so it should be judged by what it focuses on. i found this novel to be absolutely hilarious, with lots of clever and ridiculous jokes. i wanna read more, hopefully the author will pick it back up to translate or write more.
sad this didnt get picked, it was way better than low dimensional game by a ton, hopefully there Is another translator that will translate this novel, the pacing is average, and the world building is incredible, each mc ' thingys have different storylines, shame we could only follow the tales of 2 mc's cause this is not picked
It's Been Days Since The Last Update And It's Not Updating I Regret Reading This In A Day.I Wanted To Know More My Thirst For This Story Is At It's Limits.Everyday I Wake To Check On This Novel And It's Still Not Updated.I Frustratingly Continue on My Day.This Is Just Me Frustrated That The Story Is STUCK AT 301!!Sigh...
Although I love the concept ,the characterisation and world building is atrocious . Most characters aren't even 2 dimensional, dialogues are horrendous and shows how naive and childish the MC and/or author is. It is astonishing to see the writing quality is the best part of the story.
The worst novel of this week.Honestly I can't read these types of novel anymore, where mc are retarded and a bunch of cliches happen all the time
For warning everything ahead is text to speech so there will be errors. Honestly I don't really know how to feel about this story. There's so much good about it. That even the bad parts in my opinion, are easy to glass over. But one of the hardest things for me about the story. Is that the further you get in the story? The more you realize that there is more than one main character and well, that's not bad. Sometimes it gets a bit frustrating since the author likes to split the perspectives from following one character and following another character. Massive spoiler add when gabriel and karyks Homeworld are destroyed neither of them are connected with each other so they no longer can talk to each other. And while there isn't a bad thing. The bad part is that they get separated into 2. Totally different story pads. And they don't even talk to each other about it. Sometimes because they can't, and that wouldn't be bad in itself. If we didn't hear them, Talk to each other for 200 plus Chapters, and you Know that it's going in a Bad direction for both of them. The authors literally setting them up to go from being a person whose soul was essentially split in 2 by with different personalities. If that makes sense to 2 people who are going to be at each other's throats, because they'll have not only differing opinions but different outlooks on. How the world should proceed. And while that wouldn't be a bad thing, I'm just saying that after 200 plus chapters of the suspense of wondering, when they're finally gonna talk to each other, or when they're finally gonna meet up, it drags onto a point where I just can't be bothered. Anymor and that's no fault of the author it's probably a fault of my own simply because I want them to talk immediately. I want the climax to happened right away, but that's because the author keeps laying down points in the story where the climax can happen at any time, but then it just passes away and it gets really annoying..