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Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.Still, I don't recommend this.The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.Don't read this, save your eyes!
I'm at chapter 82 and I practically devoured the story it's so good. The writing is excellent, bar a few typos that definitely can be ignored, the character interaction flow well, but worldbuilding is a little lacking though I hope it will be broadened as we progress through the story. So far so good.What I'm a little concerned about is actual cultivation, little of it is actually explained and what is is a bit confusing. Jack talks about cultivation grades but we don't have a frame of reference to understand how powerful each grade is and where exactly that grade is compared to an Elder or the Peak Masters from the first volume. A question, is cultivation I'm your story basically just absorbing more and more Qi as you advance? Jack hasn't done anything special to rise in grade, just using his cultivation technique and having breakthroughs on his own.In conclusion, a very good story I will definitely suggest reading, a little rough around the edges but very promising.
Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone.Lanjutkan tulisannya.Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones.Continue your writing.
I've read the author's plan (yes, he actually prepared one for this novel), and he has a fun world planned with lots of exciting twists.Give this young weeb a chance. ?
This story is very intersting loving the pacing and the MC I am drawn in great job Author I recommend this book ????
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Well the character is not too stupid or an 'angel' like which is the best for me and I personally love the story. Don't regret reading it! ????❤️???
I actually kinda like this story, even though I am pretty slow reading stuff, story books never failed me and I am proud to say that this is one of the books that I will continue to like in the future. Hope to see more good stuff from you