The Heroine's Lover

This novel will surprise you with hidden depths, chapters down the line. I have to admit the writing style takes some getting used to--it's MC's perspective, a reckless, fearless (literally in his case), headstrong young man trying to mend his relationship with his (physically stronger, more handsome,better)younger brother. The flavor is very shonen-y and some questionable topics (abuse, harassment, misogyny, inherent sociopathy in some people) are handled rather lightly.And then we get further into the plot, delved around the reason MC wished to turn back time: his brother'sawakening, estrangement, and death. It's both good and bad for me because I'm not really a fan of the very game-esque lingo and mechanics, but the sprinkles of information is tonnes better than infodump, while also working to further the plot as MC discovers the hidden side to whatever's going on in his world

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The name of the book/story leads you to believe this story would be about money, wealth and power. It sounded like a love story for Debbie, but then the story just went crazy and I totally hated the whole concept of the ending! No Debbie, Maryann or lizzy! I simply hated the whole spell, wizards & Gods! Awful ending!

warning ! Warning ! ( it's only for man of culture )Guys you won't be disappointed .. I'm currently around 42 chapter .. .and ( creepy grin ) it's some good stuff .

Update chapter eighty-two. Average novel. No character development. Rushed plot, characters lack depth, conversations don't really flow that naturally, more as if taken out of some 2d-template generator. Overall reminds me of copy-paste novels. Not recommended to read, nothing changes for the better, and some people who read RAWs claim it gets worse instead.

I read a bit ahead, & the story seems to go on a tangent whenever it feels like it. Cool concept, wierd execution & read. 2/10