Eᴠᴇʀ Eᴛᴇʀɴᴀʟ Lᴏᴠᴇ

This novel is set in a post-calamity world caused by dimensional storms. All kinds of mythical creatures appear on Earth, but are confined to dimensional zones. Interestingly enough, these creatures can be used as Companion Beasts that can fight in battle and be used to augment certain parts of one's body. It's like an upgraded version of Pokémon!Our main character is considered a genius teenager who's rather kind and benevolent. He's calm and aloof and really just wants to game in peace to become stronger. However, there are plots and dangers that lurk in the shadow that somehow embroils him into it. One good thing about this story is that most of the characters will continue for hundreds of chapters as they build up a strong team of friends to face the pending dangers of this new Earth.

It starts off with ok grammer and a ok story but then it goes down hill fast. The mc is reincarnated but he acts childish, any problem he faces he hypnotizes people. The grammer gets so bad i don't know what is going on in certain parts of the story. Also it uses greek terminology which is find but its never explained what the words mean, so its gibberish mixed in with ****ty grammer. ?

I thought it was really good until around 68, as soon as the kobold part started my interest in the story dropped I can already see him going around helping people he barely knows with nothing in return just because they'll do it for him, so the guy says that he shouldn't put them in danger, so he feels warm inside and helps them out, so they're friends forever and will likely stay that way forever.I think it would be better for him to go through the forest alone, marrying all kinds of living beings until he climbs the food chain, and if he helps someone he would have to give something in return, very good, it would also be good one time he finds a mate to the two to evolve together.(it was translated in google translate some parts may be wrong)

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Good story, good characters, great work honestly. However, I noticed a few issues with comma splices and tense, but they were really minor and you almost have to be looking for it to notice.Unfortunately, not my style of story, but I do recommend it for anyone interested in this genre.