TomBreitenborn
It's realllllllllllllly good, I hope I can see more chapters☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Interesting and refreshing read. A great world building where characters and power levels are seamlessly introduced followed with an exceptional character development. It has me hooked and invested in the mc and his sister. 5/5
you took the first few chapters from another book and then ruined it after chapter 9, first you changed the character of the protagonist, then you made him a virgin again. you ruined the whole thing.
I love and hate this story. It gave me sometimes big emotional rollercoaster. Just hope that Mc and Luna will end up together. he even went to underworld to get her soul. She was the reason he started to change but she have boyfriend....... And hope that Irene will find her happiness. Idea with adding female version of Mc is great. Just waiting for next chapters to hate and love this story 5/5 have mood destroyed and repaired if you start to read this great story. :)
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Like the other review states, the book is enjoyable so far, well written and interesting development. The authors other book ‘the bored immortal’ is still good after 500+ chapters so I have high hopes for this book. Definitely recommend it!
I'm sad because there hasn't been a new chapter for 1 month, I'm happier to be able to read this work of art.................................
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It's been 7 fricking months dude bring it back already. I don't even know how this wasn't chosen during the first voting session but if I remember correctly it wasn't given the same time in voting pool as the other novels.
If you're thinking, "Oh, another SAO-inspired novel
It is perfectly not worth reading or mulling over. It is a book on which I have wasted 46 days reading and it still didn't match my expectations. And it is not about the synopsis. Many webnovels' synopsis are stupid. But this book's author is very bad and not upto the mark at all.
Its a good read, the MC is cunning and clever. Every character has their own development. The story is interesting ,I never got bored while reading it.ENJOY!!
