I love this story so much and especially the MC Xiao Ming whom I believe to be hilarious and also exciting. I'm looking forward to the part of the MC's love life.
besides the meme, this is a genuinely well written story. good job mate. .
So I went into this story thinking it'd be like all of the other new books and wouldn't be worth reading past the first few chapters, but to my surprise I found myself getting hooked into reading this.So my reasoning for my score is:Translation Quality 4/5Everything seems good so far but these could be translations that days were spent on and when the new chapters hopefully get released we could see a quality drop.Stability of Updates 1/5Yes we got 60 chapters at once but if this story gets picked up I have no idea if we're looking at a once a day or a few times a week in regards to updates, I'll come back and update this if it gets picked up.Story Development 3/5The story seems to be a bit disjointed in terms of tone and the story seems to be rushing from one place to another, hopefully new chapters will improve these things.Character Design 4/5I like the characters in this story quite a bit but many of them are stereotypical and don't seem to be acting like normal people would in certain scenarios so hopefully this will improve.World Background 3/5The World background we see seems to be good but there isn't much outside of those small snippets that we know about the world at this point in time.
Just finished free round and gonna give you some honest reviews.First, the game is not based on MMORPG so it's kinda refreshing to read. Second, does it lead to harem? Yes or No. All the party is Female but that's just the setting of the game. So far the flag isn't raised yet but only left to see in the future.Third, The story flow is nice, for those who like fast paced story development probably won't like it but it's just fine for me. Neither rushed nor filled up with filler.I think I'm gonna give further reading if had the chance. Wdyt fellas?
A nice change of pace from all the reincarnation and transmigration novels (which I enjoy, but can't have your fav meal every day for years).
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I really love your book it is simply extraordinary. It keeps me coming back for more so thanks for the good book ????????????????
It starts off pretty good but as it goes on the story just turns into a harem where 90% of it is about the MC sleeping with all her wives or going on dates with them or taking them out to fight monsters with him where he'll just end up sleeping with them. It's really annoying. I want more of her exploring dungeons/the world, conquering more land and getting stronger but it's just a slice of life harem.