It would have been amazing and I would have love it if the main character is a male. The novel is amazing but the only problem I have with it is the female mc and I would have love it if someone can just rewrite it but use male mc instead
It's a good novel but all of the mistakes are making it hard for me to read. If you don't mind spelling and grammar mistakes then this is a good read.
The plot is really interesting with all these creative ideas going on. But sometimes I would feel as if something is missing. Their grammar and spelling is okay, with slight mistakes.
I stopped reading very recently and I will tell you whyThe story has no purposeNow hold on a minute. Stay with me.Originally the Mc gets sent back in time after a fight with the man who stole his soon to be wife.This creates motivation for the Mc to make money to become rich in order to have the qualifications to marry this girl so much.But what's that 2 busty chicks with 0 character development come around and BAM the Mc has second thoughts about the girl he was in love with.So what comes next... what's the new motivation. What does the Mc strive for. The thing is it's NOTHING. There is no conflict and the Mc is now stupidly overpowered that if their was any conflict even oh I don't know 40,000 players trying to kill you they still wouldn't be able to do it. Now some people say that the last point might be bs because he has the 200,000 back up NPCs and the forbidden scroll but you need to remember that nobody was able to do pretty much anything in smh to him at all coupled with his-S class inheritance allowing him to wield a 2 handed weapon -his battle companion who is hinted at being the GODDESS OF WAR's SISTER [who could easily distory a lvl 150 ETHERAL FEILD BOSS dragon]-his life saving skills such as making himself go into another dimension -oh and not to mention if that all fails he can just teleport his party in who will have 2 more S class inheritance -on this the Mc says that it was rare for a REIGION to have one of these in his past life yet now on his team his 2 herem girls whos personalities are at best considered stereotypes-don't forget one of his other party members will now get himself a dragon -coupled with the fact that he can summon a pet meaning he to will probably get a dragon cause why not-he is a tank with the strength of a DPS class. This might not seem like much but it makes the Mc so stupidly overpowered the fact that no one can kill him. - he can do dmg to people almost 1 shoting them while they are powerless to do a damn thing to stop him even professionals , just look I the recent chapters of the teams from India and Europe, powerless, NOTHING they can doSo what's his motivation. What's his goal now. He is the most overpowered person in the game. And frankly NOTHING goes wrong and he winds up getting everything he needs automatically -example the first main story quest -the unicorn horn -the black dragon heart - why? Cause why notThere really is no point in reading it unless your looking forward to the chapters where there is a world war but with his guild having 3 S class inheritance when just 1 can turn the tide in a battle there really is no point in reading the bookIf you feel as though I mis-categorized something please point it out so I can clarify. I will not insult you as everyone has their own opinions End of my rant Have a nice day
A VR game where mages have to use math, research, and patience to learn spells.From chapter 39, we don’t know too much about the world. Only that there are many countries and languages, and that the map is f*ckin huge.But what does interest me is the magic system. It consists of “nodes” that players must make connections between to unleash spells. For example, Inferior Fireball. There are 4 nodes and to unleash the spell, certain connections can’t be made, the speed of the connection has to be right, and there are different variations of connections that can modify the fireball to a certain extent such as distance, power, and speed. And failing to unleash a spell has some backlash on the player. Not too much though unless It’s too high leveled. And for reference, that’s a level 1 spell. A level two spell like Language Proficiency has over 300 nodes.The author does hint at the game being too immersive and complicated for it to be a game too much for my tastes. I’m not sure if it is purely a game or something more but it’s mentioned way too much so far.The MC is quite nice though, treating the world around him quite realistically. He’s not a douche and is kind to others most of the time. But there are moments you can see him treat the world like a game which is nice.And the last thing I want to say is that it kinda irks me that his friends get classes with huge benefits. One of them becomes a noble and can sense money. Another is a saint and gets given some gold monthly I think. Our MC works in a mine to earn a few coppers and saves his money up to 2 silvers. The author probably wants to make a contrast between the MC’s hard work and dedication towards this extremely difficult class with his friends but it still irks me just a bit.Oh and there’s a forum where players can’t make posts. Hope he becomes a renowned figure on there.
Very good novel, very original and with a very interesting and charismatic main character.Highly recommended to read you will not regret it.
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Expedited turn of events to the point that we are not given time to sympathize with the MC when he does stupid sh*t. Rather than feeling that his actions were justified, it feels like explanations were glossed over and his actions become crude and immoral. I have no clue if it's the translation or it's created by design, but so far I'm not invested or impressed. Verdict: Pass.
This novel is exactly the type that I would be interested in with the easy-going and comedy feel. I do hope that this novel will get selected as I would love to know what will happen next.
Well... this novel has reached the levels of cringe I never thought possible.The story is very inconsistent or the translation is just bad so it misses the subtility/meaning in the original words. Honestly thinking about it I'm pretty sure the translation is just bad. Though the story is no better. Grammar is ok... readable. The plot is fk-in cringe... especially when the MC mixed some fruit juice and called it wine... and reading the titles he proceeded to sell a bottle for millions. Bruh... the author could have gotten so much better with the MC being a cooking prodigy and some other nonsense that is at least a little bit more believable and just more plausible and more interesting. But no... the author had to go full BS on this one.
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