TomBreitenborn
Great book love it. Can’t wait for mc to do his duty and repopulate the world lol he probably can only give birth the females but of course great. Only wish you don’t drop this and continue to write with passion it can really become in the top 50 and above if you keep going.
Good Police Ruined By The Trash Mother Is Superior.... Dictating Mc With Useless Blind Dates Every Chapter It To Annoying And Trash .. Author Ruined A Good Novel ..What A Waste
I started this story with some expectation, but honestly I'm very disappointed. The translation quality and stability are fine for now, but the development of the story, character design and world background are basically rubbish. The way he earns his power is interesting and by reading you feel as if there really is some sense, rather than just being random; but after that the story stops being good. There are many flaws in the character's day-to-day logic. He is in a marine biology university, and although he has claimed to not be a good student before, he has the mind of someone at age 8. He is always having random lascivious thoughts with women he knows, and he does not expect them to get angry. He has the habit of speaking aloud his ridiculous thoughts without even checking if anyone is listening. He was frightened in an extremely ridiculous way when he shouted nonsense on the beach and a woman heard and was angry, further stating that it is normal to imagine that she was a ghost (consideration: this woman was 'coincidentally' a police beauty, extremely nosy in the life of others). The view of foreigners from the author's point of view is also at least questionable. It looks like it will become a Chinese ultra-nationalist novel too. Anyway, strongly recommend not to read.
I feel like those officers should be more interested in why the 8 year old is working instead of in school than how busy it is. Is anyone going to talk about child labor or call the cops or something? Age him to 16 and this whole story works a lot better. Good though.
Great read, but nobody picks it up for translatig but Ifound this site where they translate from chapter 61, if you like this novel it might interest youhttp://twosisters.rf.gd/
this book is great and I think the anther did a great job with everything. The Writing Quality, The Story Development, The Character Design and The World Background
This is MHA, not One Piece. Something like the Rokushiki shouldn't even exist. He is already overpowered. How much more will you provide to his abilities !! He is already the foookin strongest
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The concept is cool, the execution not so much. The sentence structure is terrible, and the writing style is bland. I feel like the story is there, it's just not well conveyed due to the lack of proper grammar and logical story progression.
Read up to the latest chapter. Soo far so good. Translation, story and characters are good too so far. If you sleep alone or have a very wild imagination...READ THIS DURING THE DAY!! Or read something light afterwards like The Monk That Wanted To Renounce Asceticism or Seized by the System. Hurhurhur see what I did there promoting fellow system novels hurhurhurOh and please do try the mirror challenge in the novel and share what you experienced...if you are still alive or yourself that is.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
This is a very good book! I loved reading it and can read it again.
