Ten chapters in, and I can safely say I'm impressed. This novel has exceeded all the expectations I had of it, from the start. While it's not your conventional WN (based on where it is set amongst other things), the writing quality is insanely good. Like, really, really good. In fact, I think it trumps the majority of novels on this platform (not necessarily in terms of using complicated or sophisticated words, but as a fellow writer, I can appreciate good quality when I say it). So far, story development has been satisfactory, with the pace being neither too slow, nor too fast. Character Design is also great, with the author utilising different themes to bring them to life. I particularly have a soft spot for Zarqa, and Alibaba. Update stability is consistent, tho due to some irl circumstances, the release rate can't be higher. Which is absolutely fine. As long as there's still chapters being uploaded, that's all that matters ?Lastly, since I've only just finished the introductory arc, I can't speak much about world background. But after getting a glimpse of the author's skill, I'm sure it'd also be great. P.s.Great job so far, Author! Don't be discouraged by the lack of readers, you have a gem in your hands ???
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tho levi is just a young *****, he managed to handle difficult situations. i hope he still can do it until the end of the story. really nice story.
Keep it up Siyam_Haider I'm livin both books. :)
The first 70 chapters are Soo good. But then there comes the love part and it all goes stoinks. A simple date takes about 4 chapters. Buying clothes = chapter. It just became a slice of life now . His power level is stuck. No level ups, or anything. Pure school thingy, btw the school ark is useless because he didn't learn anything, well besides kissing a lady. Please author, don't forget his power leveling. Its slowly becoming a trash. Any experienced adventurer should focus on leveling up bec he's near death a lot of times because he's weak. But there he is, focusing on girls. Damn. I'm reaaallyy gettin bored.
Review for a read till chapter 3.The style of writing is not really unique, childish perhaps. No real way around it besides constant writing. The review is more for aspects outside of Grammer. I hope youll stick to writing and deliver quality works in the future.The initial chapters bored me, something a Prologue should strive to be the opposite. The story was spread too wide, many days flying by with not much going on. Its best to start off the prologue with something exciting, thrilling, something to make the readers look forward to the next chapter. The nightmare is interesting but nothing urgent or thought provoking is happening. Character actions are simply written for the sake of it. Karma goes to school, does this, does that. There is no personality. I want to know who I am following in the story. There is a difference between 'Karma ate dinner and went to bed' vs 'Karma begrudgingly shoved a spoonful of spinach into his mouth. He swallowed it whole, an action that almost choked him to death. The taste was never pleasant. He had once blamed his mother for the taste. After many attempts of his own cooking, there was no saving it. The plant was simply never made to be eaten.'. There is a lot more personality in the latter.
Good novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good novel. Keep it up, author-san. Don't mind the low ratings and try harder. Write constantly and you'll learn more things. Best of luck.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work.recommended:),
I like it it’s new and interesting ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The premise is well thought of and the characters emotions are portrayed in a genuine way.Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this is a gem in the making.Well done and write on.