Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.
Okay. So far the story has been awesome but i just finished reading chapter 108 and was thrown for a loop. Either there are missing chapters or they are out of order. Can someone please tell me the correct order to read or can author please fix it? Cause it goes from waking up in one chapter to fighting an ogre in the next. Other than this small hiccup, it has been a great novel.
overall a great story however the quality of the translation is what is really holding it back, I would recommend this story getting an editor or something because it can get pretty hard to read at times
Really good book can get hooked on this quickly very interesting. I spend half a day reading this book I totally get it. Also I wish one day I can become a writer
A fresh breath all the cliche isekais out there..the mc is also good.Also I'm here because of the author..Keep churning out the chapters author.
CAUTION!!!!! The author decided to cuc the MC. by turning all women into futas to do each other, get out while you can. Run as fast as you can before the army of futas come to get you.
I honestly like this book its very interesting to me although I do get confuse but I just need to reread whatever confuses me a couple of times and ill get but other than that this book is great
outstanding novel and very interesting to read
I absolutely loved it. Amazing translation. It's a beautiful story so far. Will you be uploaded the remaining chapters?? Can you please at least send a link to the remaining chapters? I really want to read it. Thank you
It's such a great novel! It's been a long time since I've laughed this much and the story just portraits how hilarious some situations can get! The story goes along smoothly with all the elements and well paced. In my opinion, a good read.
I am not good at writing review but i will still tell what i think about it .The story is pretty good its not outstanding but still prety ok so im giving it 5 star.
Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo novels HOWEVERyou should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath"if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anywayi cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from herethe story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 hereCharacters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied.best of luck with your novel-88