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A girl's life ends unexpectedly early, or so it would seem. Instead of eternal nothingness, she wakes up in an empty valley with no clue how she got there. Taking her predicament in stride, she sets out to do something about it. Unfortunately for her, the first couple of people she meets aren't much help. They claim they haven't heard of electricity and dress as if they were on a break from their job at a Viking-themed amusement park.

MC is a somewhat normal girl. She's pragmatic and not very angsty. The story is tagged with anti-hero, but to be clear, she is not a villain. She does good if she can, she just isn't morally motivated to do so.

The story starts out smelling of fantasy but will eventually shift towards sci-fi. It contains some supernatural elements and has a strong lead, but it is not your usual power trip. Expect a story that takes its time, but not to the point where entire chapters are spent on mindless chit-chat. I'm not into that.

This is my first serious attempt at writing and I've learnt a lot writing this. Unfortunately, that shows. Chapter 1-10 is slow and rather pointless. Things get better, but it is not until chapter 25 or so that I began understanding how to structure chapters and to make them support the larger story.

I publish about 3000 words a week (every sunday) but I write about 10000 words a week. Sticking to that pace, which is easy, the last chapter will be out by July.

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Really good book can get hooked on this quickly very interesting. I spend half a day reading this book I totally get it. Also I wish one day I can become a writer
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I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues.Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling??? gotta love that.
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try writing a better summary as the current one is too vague and uninteresting ..
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