Dark Baptism

All it took was 4 chapters to see that story is just hot garbage. The only good points is that they are translating the novel very well and the editing is pretty okay as well. Now to the bad, we're do I start. First the author summarizes before MC travels back in time in 4 sentences. 4 ****ty sentences. No background, no characterization. Multiple pov shifts that can confuse a reader. No background to base our understanding of the MC and side characters after time shift. A broken game system that randomizes a new players ability and forces them to stay with those stats even if they remake a new character. That's a broken system only someone who knows nothing about how games work and was to lazy to research for 5 minutes.If I could, I would message the author directly and tell him to burn this story from existence.

very good all around.................................... ..................................................................................

Well great start no weak to strong mc directly op mcGreat good vocublary now 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters ?????????????????????????????

I didn't like the MC's development and the general direction the story was going was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo disappointing

five stars. this novel basically does everything right and the writing and grammar are also really goodi just hope it won't be like other novels where they take a break and never returnall in all i would recommend this novel, just read the first few chaps and you'll be hooked trust me

Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.