I dont know what to say, but I like it. I like the story about some people move into random place or random world just like Isekai.Please dont make too much intro
the biggest problem in this book is development I'm 13 chapters in and feel like every chapters is missing chapters worth of context, info and development certain point in this chp that should of Been the main or one of the main climax of that chapter is just glossed over this doesn't happen once is every chapeterchp13 should of been 40-60 chapters long but is forced in and removing so much just to make it 13 its rushed
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Sword hero = what hell is gonna here. You tell me I am dead that cannot possibilities be true. I was sleep wait did my gf killed me?
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It sounds conceptually unique in a weird but good way, and the story follows as such, and I enjoy every bit of that element.Also, I have a question about "The Veil" factor in the story, where did you get the idea from? I remember something similar from a old show I used to watch, but I have a single memory of its name or what it was about.
I love the amount of details during the gamble. Even though it took a few chapters to cover. But I think it's important to the story plot such that it adds a realistic point of view of what makes us human. Human by nature are curious creature, but we are also very greedy. Only a few are able to control that. I love how the author shows the danger of wanting more (greed) using gambling as the beginning centerpiece to the story. While reading, I feel the emotional and physical toil that jose feel. It's very personal. Yes, even if you have a job it's doesn't guarantee one's success. As for boss yanlei, damn, I wanna smack so bad! I really hate him! The author did a good job in making his character (thump up) However, with the main character being Allaine Monillas I feel like not much of him is being shown yet. But the first few chapters so far does set a good foundation (setting) for the plot. Will be expecting more of him in the next coming chapters.
Interesting character plot. I like how Larry is Calm and reads the situation quickly. I'm just confused of the character's looks but apart from that everything else is cool. Keep writing author San.
Who ever wrote this is acting a bit i di otic I never seen such messed up writing and story logic and bull sh it names even if other authors themselfs tried to do bad writing they couldn't do it this bad.......... JUST HOW HOW CAN IT BE THIS BAD IT IS LIKE STORY ITSELF IS TRYING TO SUICIDE MY GOOD WHAT A ABOMINATION OF WRITING!!!!!!!!
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