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This, in my opinion, could grow into something amazing if given the chance and support. Just stick with it while the author polishes their skills and you might just find a gem.
love the book I can't wait to see more chapters I hope you continue this book
I love this novel. The power structure is sound proof with very little errors, The characters arent blank pieces of cardboard like a xianxia novel and actually have depth. I love this version of an OP Mc who isnt insanely arrogant and ignorant. My only problem is that I seem to see a path to a harem novel. Is this a harem or will the characters actually be seperate without all the women worshipping his footsteps?
Listen if you want your story to ebcome better you have to fix it yourself and read everyone’s comment. I might sugar coat this, but many people would not and have no reason to because you chose to put this novel up unless you figure out how it fails it will keep failing. just a comment hope you can understand
Pretty good so far. Interesting enough plot and characters. There are only 6 chapters at the time of this review, but the novel does have potential.
Basically the same thing as the previous sign in novels. Like the Banished one. MC gets sent into bad spot==> Discovers System==> "Attempts to stay lowkey"==> Becomes OP==> Destroys enemies. And then rinse and repeat ignoring the first two parts
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Good story. Much better than the ones we usually get in this webnovel dump. But the English is terrible here. I had easier time reading Chinese machine translation novels than this one. If the author can get an editor this novel can be a success
This is one of the best stories I’ve found here... The characters are engaging, the storyline well developed, and beautifully written. I couldn’t stop reading until I finished everything posted and when I finished, I was utterly distraught because I really NEED to know what happens next & who the other maidens were... I just wish the author was still updating. Even if it was updated only once a month... I’d be estatic. Vyvyyan- you are a gifted & captivating storyteller and I truly hope you finish this story.
Lord Krishna is very kind and he is very handsome and he has lovely voice . Lord Krishna is very caring . Lord Krishna always follow right path and he naver discriminate . Once upon a time a Demon want to marry 100000 girls so he kidnapped 16100 girls and he put 16100 girls in jail so Lord Krishna kill that demon and krishna realised 16108 girls but girls said " nobody accept us because we are in jail " . So lord Krishna marry all 16100 girls
This book is awesome and the grammar etc is impeccable. I while heartedly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good system type novel. Serious props to the author. Take my stones. :)
