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The story seems promising. I don't know why you stopped.
I hope you continue someday. The plot twists were really well-constructed. Good luck man
First I love the cover!
The story reminds me of Six of Crows. I like Ander. I think this is going to be a very complicated story, but it’ interesting!
Just a few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise awesome story so far!
it's an African American mc,we gettin contracted with PSG on this one
Author please continue on your wonderful journey. This story has great potential & it is amazing. I fell in love with within 3 chapters & I cant wait for your updates.
it's a first but it was good! I like the act of writing in first person perspective and the description was on a who picture scale. Author
read it till end or you will regret it all your life.masterpiece it is!! there may be some dissatisfaction regarding the behavior of people but it is reaally a good novel.
Really interesting story so far. I like the idea that the mc cultivates on own and discovers new realms while dealing with the estrangement with normal people around him as he is transcending human limits. It also leads to many questions: Why can he cultivate, is there something about him that is special? Are there other beings out there, even humans, that can cultivate as well or is he the only one so far? I hope that those questions will be answered further in the story but for now it gives a certain sense of mystery.
Unique book that is quite lovable for dark, gore loversps.)Author when is Sarah coming back to the story I miss her already
Y'all don't ask me any questions but just go read Chapter 163 c'mon I won't wanna waste my coin on that stuff.It seems like some sort of spirit owned our dear writer, it's crazy, if you've been following this book, you'll notice the red lights as well.I love this savage version of the author, Keep it up
I have to say the story is impressive, please don't drop it like how most new authors are doing recently. I like reading novels from new authors. All the best
