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Pretty good but there are a lot of annoying grammar and spelling errors. I recommend grammarly, it’s free
plssssssss i want way more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=recommend]
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The author has a habit of repeating chapters just to make the word count that webnovel requires of its authors. Some chapters are complete repeats of previous ones, while others are just the author copying the same text to make a chapter longer.
Its a Diifferent perspective to cultivation novels.
I enJoyed how its not dragged out Either. Good transitions, with the main character being a bit much on one perspective, and choices in life.
Though i continued to read because - to each theIr own. just glad it didn’t cross the line, and give explicit details.
Overall, it kept my attention captured. It’s nice to still read about his Gentlman side as well! A Giver and someone who thinja of others, and though his “Luck”
Is good, He continues to remain humble
can't wait for it to be released !!! I've been waiting for a novel like this. so when is it being released ????
This is honestly my first review on this site, and I have to say that this novel deserves it, simply because of the fact that this was such an awesome and pleasant novel to read, my only regret is the that I Burnt through these chapters like a drug addict on his second roll of weed, and If I were to describe what this novel is it would be the equivalent of what KonoSuba is to the Isekai genre, and what this novel is to the rest of the
Chinese trash transmigration novels.
Keep up the good work Mr. author, as it would be a shame of such a gem like this were to be dropped or abandoned.
This is somehow worse than 'Era of Beast Taming', at least in that novel the protagonist had to walk 10,000 steps to become legendary Pokemon master. In this story? The protagonist can literally sit on the toilet seat and suddenly, he'll find the Beast God of Time and Space just falling down from the Heavens to become his dutiful, mindless savant.
To top of it all. The protagonist's personality is just amazing. He has about as much EQ as someone raised by wolves - his intelligence is similarly lacking. All in all, this is the type of protagonist that makes you think..."humans can't be that stupid? Can they?"
honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often
hello author-san, I am a new reader of your work... despite all of the hate comments, I am gonna read your work. well.... everyone has a bad day and I had the worst so how bad it can be.. right
Damn, you need to read this story.
So the story starts with are mc who looks plain at first sight (he is a doctor not plain at all) who doesn't seem to know what is happiness? Is he really satisfied with his life? He is always trying to measure his happiness from his moms perspective. But one day when his sister comes back home after a year she discloses a secret. Will this secret change his life for better or worse? Let's know his journey through the beautiful Story.
Writing Quality - I really like author's writing it feels like we are living with the characters in those moments. I could feel the tension between the mc and his sister when he was dropping her.
Story development - The pace might seem slow sometimes but those scenes really are there to give depth to the character.
Character design - All the characters aren't just character in the novel we come across them in real life mc's close friend, the single mother who doesn't like people pitying her, mc himself who feel indebted towards his mother.
World background - It was refreshing to read about different cultures and country's. The author didn't shy away from world building.
Will i recommend this story? Yeah, it really made me think for a moment. I from the start was skeptical about mc's sister as I thought of her as someone frivolous but as the story went further her side of story was told. I failed at judging both daughter and mother, so I recommend not doing the same mistake.
Keep up great work author. ☺️
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