Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Has so much potential but the story is all over the place. Starts out nice enough, lays out the method of leveling and such. Then proceeds to discard the method and throws around big numbers with no real explanation of how he is leveling at all. Easily kills opponents who from the description should be plenty stronger than the mc. And at one point pulls either an inventory or item creation method out of no where with no explanation. If you’re just looking for a fun read and can ignore the flaws its alright but if you want consistency then go elsewhere.
This is wonderful. it is very interesting and no one knows what would happen next. Emerson and Jenny are too cute together. I really love Emerson ❤️