I hate good guys smh, I was gonna read it until you started talking about being a nice person on his second account. Imma read it tho, no worries.
Dropped. The synopsis is great. Just the writing is unbearable. It makes ne lose brain cells. Despite that I continued until the first interaction in chapter 5 which makes me think that either the characters are retarded or the author is.
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!
ADVICE
Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes!
This book is a wonderful read. I look forward to spending lost in the story everyday. I am so glad that the name grabbed my attention and I decided to read it.
Excellent grip of language and taught process
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This is the first time I've seen the author change the cover image, hope this mean the author will not leave this abandon. The original was quite great and I was really sad that it to was discontinued, but while this version seems a little weak (the mc) and less versatile, it does not seem like it was rush so it has a better base. All this author's novel are for lack of term novel (as in novelty) and I really hope he not abandon any of his/her work, cause their really worth reading.
"I just want more."
This is a simple message to the author.
Please sir, release at least 5 chapters per week. That would be so awesome. This is my first web novel and tbh I'm enjoying it. After reading solo leveling manhwa this is my first time try something awesome.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
The story could be built up better. Nice concept, but you ruined it with your how you started. You could have made it less cliche, but even if you had to make cliches couldn't you have made them better?
If you want to make cliche stories, make good cliche stories. Don't make it a half assed effort. You could have made it better but you ruined it. Disappointment.
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HAHAHA author isa ka pa lang Pilipino ha, chat mo naman fb mo. I'm going to invest to you. Gumawa ka lang ng isang high level fantasy katulad na ang mga kapangyarihan ay mas beyond sa multiverse at infonte ang kakakayahan ng mc.