Great Novel and i wish it was not a Faloo novel
need lots of update on this novel soo much
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Okay, I've read all the 3 chapters so I'll give my thoughts. I'm interested in the system and the adventure.
As for things I've noticed, the story almost reads like a poem because of the short paragraphs. They are only one sentence long. I'm also trying to picture the main character in my mind since there isn't an in depth character description of him.
Keep up the good work and congratulations on this.
wish this gets picked .
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I'm not sure how this novel is so highly rated. IMO it's flaws are unacceptable. -Author lacks math knowledge. He's describing things such as vast oceans when the entire world itself is just a few football fields in size. Later on describes forests, poisonous swamps, etc. when the entire world is barely over 120 acres. -The progress of others is not properly explained. The girl's world is somehow close to "creating cards" huh? How are their worlds even advancing? It takes eras for his world to progress, is it real-time for others?- MC keeps doing some things out of nowhere just because that's the way...no prior introduction or explanation. Some actions, items, additions to simulation, etc. fall under this "just because" trend. In short, can't recommend at all.
Too much DRAMA, too much bullshit, and mc soo fvking stupid,, reading this novel just pissed you off............
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From what I can see, the novel is great! Everything is perfect, and the plot is interesting. To people who are either hesitating to read this novel, I suggest that you give it a go first before deciding since you never know what surprises this book can give you.
good translation quality, great story development, interesting character design, good background. over good quality.................................................
It hurts tho you know??
We should teach me martial arts, maybe i will be able to conquer the world in only 3 years and marry the rain princess so she can make it rain.