Yuno_Jiro
It is something I would like to continue reading to see what will happen. Hope it will continue to read well.
I don't like the concept of being slave introduce in this novel ..
even if you want someone to be your slave need to release it mid story or because of extreme situations...
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Hello Everyone,
Please give this novel a read if you enjoy the following in a story:
OP MC
Fast Paced
Cultivation
Comedy
I will try my best to consistently update the novel at least once per day.
I love this story. I've already finished it. But the ending is too rush.. It was disappointing. I admit, the whole story (except the ending) is amazing and entertaining... He'll just be unlucky all over again..
It has be good so far I really like it!!!!!
I like it. The beginning was hilarious. Keep up the good work.
The translation quality is awful. Also guns in a cultivation novel? It doesn’t make sense for the most part.
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this isnt a bad novel its just not that good.
the grammar and the world background are all fine but the mc is a pushover with a hero complex, the story is badly paced. im at chapter 50 and he has yet to practice his skills, his understanding of the situation is severely limited considering that he has plenty of information sources around, his choices when it comes to abilities is quite poor. in a sense you could say he is fairly incompetent while receiving quite a few advantages(gold core, family background).
he spends more time on his relationships then actually optimizing his ability to survive during this apocalypse.
50 chapters and i believe 3 days have passed from the beginning of the story. for this novel to complete at the current pacing we are looking at thousands of chapters and the author will definetly not finish that kind of task. it is simply too ambitious.
its quite a frustrating read, if that doesnt put you off then you can give this novel a try.
I don't know who copied who or if it is the same author with a different pseudonym, but this novel is 95% similar to Animal assassin group. It doesn't even try to be anything worth while.
Please webnovel, add quality control.
This novel is good .
