Yuno_Jiro
Finally something different. Great start, seems to be a good quality work, hopefully this gets picked up._________________________________________
this isint an original novel and it costs gems to read despite using other games and entertainment this is not an original and theyre making money out of it i want them to copyright this so bad, The idea is also similar to "only i know the plot"
It's a sect type sign in with weaker, or I say slower progress.. And also the plot hole is a bit here, a bit there.. Definitely lower quality than the sign in Buddha palm.. Maybe author rushing for this genre before it got snuffed by new genre...
please pick it up and keep writing or translate it till the end in pure English....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's a good plot, the characters are written well which is very engaging! Author work is much appreciated. Hope he updates with constant chapters.
To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more interesting...
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This story has a loot of potential the only thing is the story has a very slow update speed. PS NNNNNNNNNNNNeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEd more
It's very good story but the world background or what's has happened in Li's past is covering only half of has actually happened, but overall the story was entertaining for me to read
I am not sure if I am even qualified to review because the author here is really really good. I just started by reading a few chapters to give it a go and the whole time it got me craving for more. I will be back to read from the first again when I start my break. This deserves an undivided focus to read. At least I believe so ^^
Feels too much like i’m reading “my taboo system” even if author said the plot will be different and the writing/grammar doesnt help it either
The story is is great for now, with very stable updating that I really appreciate by the author. The story is perfectly readable with no grammatical errors and show great potential.
