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Hi, Just want to once again add that this is my first story so it is inevitable that i will make mistakes, I apologise for that but i'm doing this for fun, so don't expect a lot.
Feedback is always welcome as i do want to look for ways to improve, and I don't a specific stuff set out so if you have any suggestions then you can also leave them and if i find it good i'll implement it. Hopefully you enjoy this and if not then fair enough. Thanks
Gave it 3 stars as i don't want to rate my own story.
I got give you 5 star because it is a new undertale fan-fiction . Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
This website produces the largest volume of translated web novels I have found on the internet but with such a large volume of work comes the problem of extreme variety in quality. Laziness is the reason many novels end up lacking because either the novel itself takes shortcuts in favor of increased word count or the translator is only focused on quickly sending out the next chapter without carefully editing their work. Thsee issues make it all the more remarkable when something like this comes out. Laziness is the farthest thing from this content creator’s work ethic. Not only is the book itself a unique take on the returner and the vmmorpg genres but actively engages with the readers regularly and willingly reuploads their chapters losing out on many comments that boost their stats in order to maximize the quality of their work. Selfishly I want this writer to stay on this platform in order to consume their novels for free but this author clearly deserves a publishing house to make them a star. 10/10 flawless
Very curious reading this book....!
Its a reality where all the students gone through...!
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Read it, great stuff.
so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.
Absolutely stunning details! This book truly throws you in the action of it all. This would definitely make a outstanding movie, I applaud you!
Helo, the development is interesting so far and I had a good laugh from some jokes. Just note some grammar errors and it'll be good to go. Unique way of writing too.Keep up the good work.
Hey there, it’s your friendly neighborhood author.And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022.I hope y’all support me!?✨Also, constructive criticisms are allowed?
honestly this is the best novel I've read so please update it