I didn't enjoy the ending of this book, there was too much sadness and not enough good parts. it's as if the book was too short, the red eyed just came and went with no explanation of his origin and motivations besides becoming the alpha king. Too much was left unsaid
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HN1F is telling journey of Ling Feng, man who traverse from modern world into xianxia world, in recruiting disciples and building a sect. The twist is the 4 main disciples all are main characters from 4 other xianxia novels which are renegade immortal/xian ni, BTTH, perfect world, and yang god. So, to fully enjoy and appreciate this novel, you better read at least part of those novel first. As the plot of this novel kinda like parallel universe of those novels' world merging into one, but with Ling Feng as main characterThis novel plot is really smart and funny in merging 4 novel plot into one and creating original story. The MC, Ling Feng also smart but still holding morale. The 4 disciples also have similar character as in original novels.In conclusion this novel is awesome and must read if you are fan of xianxia novels.
Typical power fantasy, won't waste words here. It's entertaining enough if you're into that kind of stuff.However the lack of editing is very apparent. There are so many instances of missing words, wrong character or item names or incorrect pronouns. I could go on. That is not acceptable in my opinion.
So far so good but it has typical xianxia plots save for the somewhat "rare" system. .
I hve read upto chapter 20 more than half of the story I jve just scrolled down same repetated plot repeated face slaps and same how the story is developing same how the whole world is against hero and how he makes a comeback with system and luck in last min. I am tired bro just change some plots atleast pls to
Reading this is a chore. The author describe every unnecessary details, it's tiring. The plot and idea is decent, but the execution is poor.
Did mc forgot that he has a mother who ??? It is said in the very first chapter that he did'nt return home so that he could'nt be the burden to his mother but i have read till chapter 400,he still has'nt returned to his mother..
Translation Quality - Decent from what I can tell from first impressions.Stability of Updates - Not sure yet, will wait until it is picked.Story Development - It feels like the author has taken a lot of inspiration from Pokemon, but set the story in a real world setting. From my initial read it feels like the story is well paced, by which it takes months rather than days for the MC to become powerful (But he still isn't the best even with the system).Character Design - The characters are quite refreshing when compared to some of the cliches that appear on this website. However, this story can feel like a Pokemon fan-fiction at some points. For example, the author uses different names but similar descriptions for the various Sprites, which can come across as weird and overly-long to read at times.World Background - From what I can tell it has a slice of life feel to it and the various places visited are appropriately described. The main setting so far involves school and the city, with the various other countries and organisations that are explained early on. Overall, a decent read but it would feel easier to read if the Sprite names were shortened to something more manageable (Just a personal Preference).
This is a slap-stick comedy about an MC who transmigrates into a wealthy young man's body and gets a system thrown into the mix. In exchange for spending money, he can earn status points, which is great because the host's body has poor health and a tiny dick. The previous owner of the body apparently overcompensated for his miniscule man bits and health problems by spending money to the point of becoming infamous for it.The setting is straight-forward, and there are no major plot holes. Other characters include the fiancee, who acts as the straight man in their pair, and a financial expert maid/bunny girl. I like the finance expert.The translations make sense.Although there are no big errors in this series, it's not all that funny for me either, and entertainment from the MC blowing his money can only last for so many chapters. It's not my cup of tea. HOWEVER, if you like slapstick comedy or are looking for something light to read, then one might work for you.
This Book is just digusting !I don't have any other words to discribe it .The idea is intriguing and interessting but the content disgusts me!This Book is on Hiatus for 4 months now and I hope it stays that way.
Idea is good and i'm very interested in continuing reading the story but i'm so tired of side characters. Almost all of side characters have disgusting personality and it takes away the desire to read at least something where the main character is not involved. Even if they are side characters with more or less good personalities. I think I already skipped about half the chapters because of this. I hope the development of the story will be better further and I will not have to skip a bunch of chapters again. The GIF below is my reaction to the vast majority of side characters