to tell you the truth readers.. This is definitely not recommend novel because the writing quality Is so worse even me that has almost 4 years reading experience Chinese,Japanese, english novel i already experience it how terrible Chinese translation are... This novel is worse than Chinese novel it seem 16 years old maybe or lower maybe write it and just quite new at english language. And i hate quite story development because it was so fast as if the heaven helping him or lets just say in Chinese Novels "World Law" as if he was heaven child and i hate system too... because it came from the system power he was just like low exercise and get multiple ℅ strength i mean it came from system power and even knowledge why don't you just give him op knowledge like level 1 dont have knowledge suddenly have heaven defying knowledge because of unknow encounter even people didn't know ya know what i mean i will not explain anymore because it was wasting my knowledge even it can only last 24 chapter as if this is masterpiece but not really because of the writing quality
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I like your story. Very creative, its way beyond better than kings avatar and highschool dxd.Shammel penuliar would be great demon king someday, i know he will. I will keep reading this novel.
just want to help fix the rating on this amazing and hilarious book I've managed to stumble on. Read it. It's funny. Please?.......................
MC always one step ahead well multiple even us, grate work!!! ???
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I see that the author is doing everything in order to increase the quality of the novel, the story is interesting even tho some parts are missing, the 5 stars are to encourage the novel and the author for the good work so far.
This novel is great! My only complaint is the slow release rate! Why is it only 14 chapters! One of the best novels i have ever read. Good Job!
The novel is unfinished and at this point, I don't think it'll be finished.The story was decent but nothing amazing.Personally, I wouldn't spend my coins on this story.
A great story, interesting characters, a lot of great background and it’s hard to put it down even for a non gamer. Excellent work, makes you want to learn more about Greek mythology
After reading though 30+ chapter, I think, I better drop this. The game element is truly dump. If someone really open a game like this, it will be closed in a week. It's just like fantasy world that has a game system. Crimes, gores, sexual contents (not happen yet, but a mentioned of allowance by the gamemakers), these happened secretly in the context of the story, and the government don't issue a ban yet.MC don't have anything but kung fu. Kung Fu maniac with out a specific character or goal. A casual and very noob player with an exploited cheat, called Kung Fu skills.The story can be more interesting, if his mage class has at lease a hint to do with a progress of the story aside from being mentioned as a hindrance or a handicap, he has against those with physically related class.Side characters? Aside from the female thief, who possibly be a female lead, there is no one that memorable at all up to this point.
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