NixelLazuli
when are the new chapters man come on like bruh this is an alright sequal I wanna finish it but I can't because there are no new chapters it makes me sad ):
Interesting story! I like how you put it into detail and give me an image of what's the world MC has in the story.I hope the author won't drop it and continue updating the story.
The cover is scary and the synopsis sounds interesting. I’m just not sure if I will continue to resd the novel. Maybe yes or maybe no? Definitely need some time to think about what to do
Seems like the typical cultivation novel but with spirits like peerless battle spirit except he can devour spirits. Give it a try but its not my cup of tea so far
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
Aaah, Minceraft is really sweet... Definitely a typo on my part if you notice.The story is about a person name George with a System. However, we are focusing on Minecraft items in the early-game of the story. We are going to face the worldly bliss of Minecraft after you read the story. As for the future, only the God of all in this story (Author) will know about it.Okay, now I don't know what to write anymore, I'll just post this stupid writing of mine. For the sake of raising our Author over here to the Realm of Displayable Stars (Basically having 10 Reviews).By the way, exp.
The synopsis is interesting and kind of made me question myself. The writing is superb and I like the pacing. Looking forward for this book~
A really good novel. Found this little treasure in the writing contest. The novel contents everything you need for a really good story about a strong female lead.
Alright, let me start off with some deserved praise. The story is good, I almost got hooked to it. The plot is heading in a very interesting way, and you did a good job building a not-so-cliche background of the protagonist/s. The pacing is good, each chapter gets you somewhere. The humor in this novel is also just right beside my taste.HOWEVER,the character design is too forced, the way they converse is too robotic and stiff. They have no feelings at all, the mc can even be considered as a repugnant douche with how he deals with things, although I don't particularly hate that kind of mc.The world building is too poor. The details are absolutely non-existent. Up until now, I have no idea what the mc looks like, that Jessica girl, and that Golden boy. Like, they just exist there, they do not have a single spoon of appearance or expression.And to top it all, the grammar is not even on an average level. There are too many newbie mistakes even in the synopsis itself. Let's take the scene where Jessica was being dramatic in front of the mc:"In the first moment she tried to resist, and even landed a few punches and slaps in his body. But after seeing that struggling was futile, she just accepted the facts and enjoyed the moment."How the f*ck can you punch and slap 'IN' someone's body.Using a little common sense would surely fix that problem, but that's not the point.Anyway, that's it for my review.IMPORTANT TO TAKE NOTE, I have no grudges with you and I don't hate your novel or whatsoever. I came here to review, not to kiss someone's ass despite their faults.Good job so far on your first novel. Keep writing and good luck.
Boring so far....The little girl is too naive.. OH really. it a ancient time , where there is always a war going on. how can the little girl be a stupid crying baby. Im already confuse about what going on. At least she should have a ball stand up for herself.
5 StARS simply because of that God level introduction.hgghuhbyhhhhhhhhhuhgyhhuhhggggyggggggyggyggyggghggyggygggygghhgyhuhgffftgvy
HELL YEAH! its finally being translated. I have been keeping up with the comics but finally!!! We are so behind but it finally translated! Also mc is super op but has very cool interesting powers.
