Dream_Lord14
Ah. Every week I anticipate whether or not this book will FINALLY leave the voting pool. Voting pool is lasting too long this time, isn’t it? So many other books have been removed already but there hasn’t been any new ones continued in a while.
Definitely a hidden gem on this website.The writing quality (grammar etc.) is very good.The characters are quite dynamic and I really like the world building until now.I really hope the author doesn't drop this.
It is really good and I hope that you will start to post some chapters I hope he finds a girl that actually loves . .
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Damn, where is the 5th Trial Novel.....*Gritting teeth in anger* ?(
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It is a good story with interesting characters the personality of each character are so different which makes this novel more fun to read ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Wow, there's a lot to process from the first chapter. It's action packed and filled with comedy. Screaming for his mummy, really? The author has a great sense of humor, I'll give him that.The transitioning was smooth. I easily understood the way the game gave Leona rewards for various successful attacks on the succubus queen with thick makeup.My only critique was the way the author used the third pov when trying to introduce us to the "Hendra" character. Isiriana was described perfectly and so was Leona. Towards the end, the narration of Leona beating Isiriana was great and all but earlier in the fight when Hendra was struck by her nightmare powers, it wasn't explained properly.I had a hard time understanding what exactly was going on.Overall, great execution of the world background.Keep it up, author.
