Updates and World building are 3* since it's new. The writing is good, not a lot of mistakes. The flow of the story is slow but its written well. Log Horizon type MC with a loli sidekick. A lot of redundancy, either because he's padding his chapters or the author likes to hold our hands as we read. To me, it's meh. It wasn't good and it isn't bad either. It was bland with a few eye twitches when the MC becomes too full of himself. I mean, if you know how to solve the problem, then solve the f*cking problem instead of playing around and causing more problems. Anyways...Verdict: Pass/Dropped
As a reader, I like to know what is going on.The introduction is rough, and I don't even know if this is a game or a transmigrator etc. Until later on. It has potential but I am too distracted to enjoy.
The background of game is not very well defined and is progressing too fast compared to real world which is way better . Also comparing MC and saying things that I'm not same like other novels characters or movie characters again and again makes annoying just remove that its not like i won't refuse like novel mc or rich boy bla bla things
Very bad worldbuilding.The main character is two dimensional.No real background, and acts irrationally.I don't know how other people rated it so highly.
interesting novel, with slow pace, fleshing to see an mc who is not op, but with all good things comes bad things, the mc is personality is pretty bland, he is not completely cold blooded but he is cold in a way, he doesn't seem to have personal feelings what so ever, he is mostly calculating situation almost like a machine and human hybrid, he is bullied but he doesn't seem to feel any anger nor care which is weird, the mc has no magic, just minions, but in the world he is in there are people who can avoid death, tho he has enchanted things but he personally isn't that strong without sacrificing his memories further more turning into emotionless pupet.though it is a little boring I'm gonna keep reading cause why not,finish what I have started.
I like it so far I hope it can be more chapters to add to it my lkids love this Story so that makes it a plus for me and I really enjoy reading it thank u so much
The novel is just unique. The plotting and character development are quite good. The author is doing a great job. I strongly recommend this novel to everyone.
Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.
The light novel is great however the romance is absolutely horrible. Are you telling me any woman who stays with the mc for a few years and comes to like him will suddenly become the mc’s ‘dao heart’ and ‘taboo for any enemies to speak her name’????? Wtf is this I thought the mc is a ruthless mc not a softhearted guy who can’t bear to leave a woman just because she likes him and got Stockholm syndrome. The only reason she became the mc’s girlfriend is because it’ll be really pitiful if she doesn’t. The only thing she does for the mc is to make pills but still schemes against him. The mc is supposedly ruthless so why didn’t he just turn her into a puppet after all the times she tries to kill him and ends up ‘being more important than his own life’ since she comes to like him, why does he have a love life anyways if he’s so ruthless, he’ll just end up getting a burden. I like how his girlfriend has no unique qualities and has done barely anything for him. The author is absolutely horrible at creating romance, pretty much like his other light novels.
Woo hoo, another reincarnation novel !! :D Loved intellectual MC and how he analyses situation. Thank you for choosing to translate this novel !
Kind of one sided and overpowered MC, then the book just ends very dissapointed. lots of things left hanging and a couple dissapeared characters that seem forgotten during the story
this novel is so dumb who wrote it?MC is brain dead MC gets in constant conflicts for no reason surely the author doesn't know how to write a novel