It really is great and funny in my opinion the update is a bit slow because author have other works it's better to read it in SCRIBLEHUB the update is earlier.
a great story i love it and i hope you don't drop that what will jake do to stefanie's parent i hope jakes hypnosis theme to make pamela wished hers husband peter to be a dominate husband who would make her a submisive cuckqueen ***slave, and peters hypnosis to become a submissive cuckold slave to be humiliated. and when Pamela start to fall in love with Jake and confesse all her dark secrets to Peter and he tells his dark secrets and he wisch that Pamela to seduce Jake. and when Jake movies in with all his slave and diceded to renovet the house he will alowe peter to stay as a servent and give hime a rom next to the master bedrom with a very thin wall with a One-way mirror and what humilateddeutice he as
So he goes down the hill and gets the reward and stays alive in a coma until the death day...
Really enjoyed this, partly because of how much I can relate to the first MC. What's weird was other than the novel in general I found the way you write really captivating, it was really seductive I guess? but the fact that you killed off the MC is extremely disappointing, He was one of the reason I was reading the novel other than the way you write. I probably won't continue reading this unless the MC somehow revives which is not likely since the guy with no balls and less interesting Character got a system. Either way the plot twists and fights were amazing. it's solid 5 or 4.9 but you know what happened for It to be 4.6, tbh I was curious about his memories of his late father but whatever.
It is nicely written story so far with very good English used with little repetition of certain phrases. The struggles of the MC were vividly expressed the only thing that was missing was more chapter.
It's premium but translating it so slow... Drop it It's premium but translating it so slow... Drop it It's premium but translating it so slow... Drop it It's premium but translating it so slow... Drop it It's premium but translating it so slow... Drop it
it is canopied from another novel.........
plz plz plz release more chapters Q-Q. I'm planning to read this and by first chapter the story looks so interesting to read but im waiting for chapters to get released so that i dont get depressed >.>
This novel has a very good premise, the MC works hard and has a system and I like that combination a lot however there are quite a few problems I had with the novel. Firstly, the MC works very hard and has OP skills ranked SS etc however he's not that impressive. Sure, he's better than the others but he's not astoundingly good and he improves quite slowly despite his 99 luck stat and system. That being said, he is very good. Secondly, the romance is utterly forced, the MC's personality is like 'I love my mom so much, I'll do whatever to make her happy and even have her live with me and my wife after I get married.' MC is also very boring in my opinion, his actions are really robotic and also the way he talks is (or how it's written). However, the biggest problem is the grammar for me. If an editor was hired it would retain a lot more people to read this I think. Paying SS for grammar of this quality sucks. This is not the author's native language, yes, but for the novel to be pay-walled it should have good grammar. A few more points; the upload speed is very good, the author doesn't take long hiatuses like other authors of original novels or even translations. If you're a fan of basketball and steady growth of a main character playing it I recommend this.
There must be some sort of conspiracy going on with the power stones because this story does not deserve first place. I'll summarise it for everyone here.MC's temporary boss/high ranker/harem candidate tells him not to let anyone leave town because it might be too dangerous. Random low-tier noob says she wants to leave anyway. MC pulls out a gun and point it at her head and tells her he'll kill her if she leaves. He could have just said, "hey, the gold-ranker says you can't leave because there are monsters roaming outside" but naw, straight to gun-in-face. Keep in mind this isn't some grimdark fantasy, this is a hyper-modern world where there's supposed to be rule of law. Our MC is a psychopath, but it gets worse.Random bozo tries to stick up for the girl and say the MC is being unreasonable, MC literally thinks random bozo is just doing this for a pretty face and is proud that he isn't swayed by pretty faces. Author makes it clear he's also proud his MC isn't, the chapter title is literally titled "What's Being Kind to Women?".Suddenly, for no reason at all, random mid-boss antagonist who has been harassing MC (and other people) jumps in to start a fight against MC, not because of the girl but because he wants to pick on MC. They look like they're going to get in a fight. Mid-boss is definitely stronger than him, he literally beat MC like yesterday and let him go because "you're so weak you're not worth killing even though I'm here to kill weak people because I'm weird."MC doesn't back down, because I don't know, being a dumbass threatening some random girl with shooting her in the face so she doesn't endanger herself is more important than his own life, which is all so stupid I can barely breathe. Fortunately, they're suddenly interrupted by random bullsh*t and everybody forgets what they were doing. In the ensuing few days MC exerts his dominance by beating up sh*t-tier background characters with no names and doesn't let anyone leave.Somehow, this makes people trusting and admiring of him, which is important because he's about to lead a squad into battle because his boss/harem candidate thought all that previous bullsh*t was genius work by him. A couple of chapters later he declares he's going to stay and defend the town from monsters despite being having a power rating of effectively zero when there are literally a thousand other super-powered high level humans running around. Literally tens of thousands of years of combat experience between all of them, and somehow MC is piping up with his sh*t-tier ideas and people are calling it genius. It also feels super weird because our MC has been relatively focused on himself and his sister so far, and this is the first hint that he gives a sh*t about anybody else, yet he's suddenly burning with self-sacrificial desire.Not long after, it turns out this was a tremendously stupid idea (which literally other more experienced people than him told him at least three times) and he's going to die, 100%, no take-backsies. Just then he gets a system notification: Would you like to get your get-out-of-jail-free card I didn't tell you about and you didn't know you had? He's like: "sure". And then the magic wish automatically determines how to get him out of the situation with no input from him, and kills millions of monsters with a nuke that only hits bad guys and instakills everyone but the boss, and saves the day. No, I'm not joking or exaggerating in the least.But wait, it didn't kill the boss. Boss appears and says, haha, you humans are so dumb, Superman-Goku Macguffin the 3rd isn't coming to save you, Superman is a dumbo and is fighting my sekret clone. By the way, I'm going to kill all of you, especially you MC. Suddenly, harem candidate goes, "Wait boss monster, can you please give me 3 minutes to confess my love for MC? Pleaaase? Pretty pleeaaase?" Boss monster goes: "Okay, sounds fine with me, but don't doublecross me or I'm gonna like, kill you. Uh, I guess I'm gonna kill you anyway but I'll like really super duper kill you or something
Well, Harem most of the times is a big no from me, as memories of [Castle of Black Iron] is still fresh when few of the MC girls wanted to leave and it stings straight in the heart. Till c380, Worry has handled in a mixed way(maturely and immature both) but I'm satisfied somewhat. Not sure why I talked about the above stuff but wanted to vent somewhere after reading the novel. It's not about the novel but emotions which got sturred while reading it. The most attractive highlight of the novel to me will be emotional and physical fulfillment between couples. Most of the times novels tends to one side more than the others but Worry has maintained a delicate balance between them and I hope it never happens.Good Work and Keep up the Passion ???
I am in love with the story already