grammar makes you want to vomit, main character personality is all over the place. (ie on earth he is a really nice man, like how he saved a female traveler at the start... later on when he gets stronger someone gets impaled by a water spear by their teacher in front of him because person offended him{person said get out of my chair or something equivalent} and he did not care at all.(there's so many more examples of this as well). the foundation of the story is unique, interesting and new I love the idea of growing by understanding the laws of the world, but author you need to improve before trying to write a concept like this, its too hard for someone of your skill level to try this
The Writing Quality is 5 Stars based off the average webnovel, with the Stability of Updates being very good at time of review.
Im mentioning this all before because what im going to say is me hating on the story a bit.
I dont think the concept was as well executed as it could be, or maybe its just my own interpretation of what I read.
The story starts off great, but there seems to be so much filler it dulls the mind, and one of the MC's being this litteral god of weaponry who can create new techniques within a week, makes you want to see the other MC's (Rean's) specialty.
And by 64 hes a fuckin blacksmith, now dont get me wrong, I love blacksmithing novels, but to be fair Ive only ever found two. Blacksmithing can be made cool, but it seems that by the time of mid-story, the author just didnt care about making Rean anything special.
I mean he has the light element, while Roan has the dark element. There twins, when I read these details I was thinking,
" Oh thats so badass, theyre gonna have this connection of hate-portrayal (from what I could see by there personalities twoards another) where they actually enjoy eachothers company, but theyll never say that.
Rean will be a master healer who benefits the tribe by supporting and giving ideas, while Roan is this master of combat who knows all weapons "
Sure thats a bit dramaticized, but Roan does end up being like that, he is a badass kid who knows how to beat people above his realm of cultivation, he knows every weapon in the universe, he makes techniques when hes bored and cultivates hard.
What does rean do? Makes fuckin low-quality steel and sells it off, then the next chapter we see Roan hinting to him to try and learn how to use the light element sense he collects it faster than Roan so he should master something of his own instead of relying on Roan, the **** does he do, he makes a god damn light saber.
I dont think Rean is especially stupid, I just believe the author is making him retarded.
Sorry for the bad grammar and the swear at the end, but this is just so sad to see such a great concept unexplored.
First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel.. Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this.. The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap.** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
I have a divine tree up my ass!That's the only way to describe this novel.Author constantly strokes China's elongated schlongus maximus like it's his life throughout the trail chapters. Apparently it's a whole nationalism novel + savior systemAtleast in Earthlings are Insane, it was more Earth nationalism than Chinese nationalism, which I can bare. MC needs to "contribute" in order to gain potential strength. Yay.This is all just a pain in the ass, hence the first sentence of this review.
5 star because it's a Master-Disciples type of novel. Hopefully it would be translated and not just be here as a false hope.................
A subpar novel that introduces nothing new to the genre. Main character spends more time trading insults with other people than forging. For whatever reason enemies pop out left and right regardless of age. 2.5/5 stars.
I like this book. Keep up the good work.Make this novel release from the trial read section.Many will follow this light novel. Hopefully many fun loving people who loves wuxia novels will agree with me
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Great story! I enjoyed the first few chapters the book had to offer. Looking forward to future chapters and how the plot progresses! ????
A very well thought out and beautiful design. Looks like a lot of time and effort when into this. Over all not finishes but so far an amazing read.
Not gonna bother reading as I can tell that it's probably very cliche and I will just get mad when the mc starts talking about jade like skin and hair flowing like water.