Just wanted to let you know that you’re book is for sale on kindle under a different name and has already been read and reviewed by multiple people. I don’t know if someone just copy pasted your work or if you upload it under a different name but someone is making a profit of of your story.
This story will be based on the life of Maddoxx, a technically normal guy, who discovers his origins and his father past.
Trying to follow his steps, while protecting friends and important people to him.
Most of the time we will have mercenary missions, crazy action and even more crazy people. But if we just put characters like that they will be empty. So we will have some romance between every mercenary and his dear-half. After all guy deserves a good girl to welcome him after a tough mission.
Drama is a good thing for the plot and character background. Everyone have their own **** to hide or to regret. I am not that kind of guy who forgives everything. I'm not the guy that gives a plot armor to the main character and make them immortal or some ****. Everyone dies after taking a good shot. Everyone can be killed while sleeping.
This is a 'real' novel, it happens in our own world with some real facts, sometimes with real data, and i will try my best to make everything plausible. But keeping the fun of the read.
What i am trying to say is that this is not a transmigration/reincarnation/System ****, this is a novel where our mc can die anytime, he is not invincible, he is not OP, and he is not dumb.
Our mc likes pus***, he likes girls, he likes money, he like guns, he like his friends.
I have some goddamn missions in mind, i have some incredible ideas for the plot. If you guys give me a chance, I will show all of them to you.
Sorry for making it long. Enjoy.
That fight lasted as long as i thought it would.
Only 1 chapter so far so read this with a grain of salt.
writing Quality: 4/5. It'd be perfect, but the author doesn't get her/his right and it took me out my reading flow at least 4 times.
Updates: New novel. Can't judge yet.
Story: 5/5. Sounds like an interesting virtual reality world will soon unfold before us.
Character Design: Both characters are distinct and interesting. Their hair, build, etc. are described well.
World Background: 5/5. We know what world they're in and where the MC stands in it.
Advice for author: Read up on possessive his/her.
I really like this novel, because finally the mc has the power of poison, hope the author add new poison abilities(Magellan one piece)
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Very good beginning but since the entrance exam its horrible to read… stretcht way too long to the point, where you wait for 50 chapters for it to end and dont actually like these 50+ chapters.
ahh~ this is fantastic! now, we can move on to flying sword~ it's getting more and more interesting..but, I really hope that he can cultivate in the real life later and get rid of his crippled state..poor yuan~
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Very good. Calm, calculative Mc. Able to use what he has to his advantage. Minimal to no cliches. It’s interesting and draws you in. I hope this gets picked, as I’m still craving for more.
I'm thoroughly confused with this story .It's boring . MC killed his patents by his own mistake . Well here goes nothing .
Read if you want .but I don't recommend it .
A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life.
Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.