Hi everyone, I am the translator of SoG. Currently, the editor and I are working to produce more chapters. Please leave any comments or suggestions you may have regarding the story plot, characters or anything else! Thank you!
OMG MC seems too so naive, specially with his >>>
It falls into the trope of building characters only for one arc and then never using them again.
Female characters that would appear long term are forced to be abandoned cause they can't keep up
And if you have read any cultivation novel you know that when he leaves the realm everyone becomes unimportant never to be seen again That happens in chapter 416.
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The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.
Can’t remember if I’ve left a review... honestly, the novel was a little bumpy in the start, but it has turned out to be one of the best books I’ve read on this app in my opinion. Biako does an excellent job at making you want more at the end of each chapter. Yeah, there are some grammar errors, but as he says English isn’t his first language. All together, the book has a great story line and amazing imagination. It keeps you guessing. It’s hard to tell what the MC’s next move will be or how he predicts things might turn out. I like how the MC actually runs into problems and it’s nice to see him struggle. PLUS, if you get privilege for this book, he charges ONLY 1 COIN no matter how long the chapter is. I mean come on. That’s awesome!! I haven’t found an author that does that yet. A good book for a small amount of your coins! The update rate is slow, but I think that just makes you want to read it even more! Keep up the awesome work Biako!!
i need the raw, this seems like a good read, especially the name of the mc, reminds me of the strongest system.
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I saw your book on Ashy's discord though I don't talk much, love the book and I hope you continue writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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j'ai adorer ce novel , j'ai me suis amuser a imaginer si il créez des jeux vidéo qu'est ce que sa donnerait merci de traduire ce roman hate de voir plus de mise a jour
can't wait
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Great novel ❣️....... ...... ..........